Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
As an AI language model, I don't have personal opinions or beliefs, but I can provide you with an analysis of the topic. The recommendation to offer college and university education free of charge to all students is a complex issue with arguments on both sides. while the idea of free education may seem appealing, it is important to consider the practical implications and potential consequences before reaching a conclusion.Advantages of offering free higher education include increased accessibility and opportunities for students from disadvantaged backgrounds. By removing financial barriers, more individuals would have the chance to pursue a college or university degree, potentially leading to greater social mobility and a more educated workforce. this could contribute to a more equitable society and provide individuals with the skills needed to succeed in the modern job market.However, there are several challenges and drawbacks to implementing free higher education. Firstly, the financial burden of providing free education would fall on the government, which could strain public budgets and potentially lead to increased taxes or reduced funding in other areas. Additionally, without the cost associated with education, there may be an increase in the number of students enrolling in programs that they are not fully committed to or interested in, leading to a potential waste of resources.Moreover, making higher education universally free could also devalue the degrees earned by individuals. When education becomes widely available without any financial investment, the perceived value of a degree may decrease, and the job market could become oversaturated with graduates. this could potentially result in reduced job prospects and lower wages for graduates, ultimately undermining the goal of pursuing higher education to enhance career opportunities.Instead of making education entirely free, a more balanced approach could involve expanding financial aid programs, scholarships, and grants to support students from low-income backgrounds. this targeted approach ensures that those who need assistance the most receive it while still maintaining the value and merit-based nature of higher education. By focusing on providing support for disadvantaged students, governments can bridge the gap and make education more accessible without compromising the quality and overall sustainability of the system.In conclusion, while the idea of free college and university education has its merits in terms of accessibility and social equality, there are significant challenges and potential consequences to consider. A more viable approach may involve a combination of targeted financial assistance programs and merit-based scholarships to support students in need while maintaining the value and quality of higher education
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2426.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88834951456 5.05705443957 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42336622751 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521844660194 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 781.2 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7258169215 60.3974514979 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 202.166666667 118.986275619 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3333333333 23.4991977007 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189846033143 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789945703683 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667391738637 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189846033143 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 14.1392134831 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 48.8420337079 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.1639044944 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.