The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the past few decades, there has been an exponential growth in the field of technology. Starting from the building of computers to human being mimicking robots, the advances in this field has been enormous. But with this advance, there also comes the question, will machines become superior to humans one day? Also, a lot of sci-fi movies are based upon robots taking control of the world and humans as slaves under them. So, this leads us to deliberate upon this topic and, I,
by agreeing with the sci-fi movies disagree with the prompt and I would like to back my stance with the following reasons and examples.
First of all, in the past two decades, the areas of machine learning and neural network have gained immense popularity. This concept is based on the way humans perceive and learn things through experience and how the neurons in the brain are activated upon external stimulus. This field has the potential to replace humans with robots in several workplaces. In fact, machines have already supplanted humans in a few places. A rudimentary example would be a coffee vending machine, where the coffee is made by a machine, whereas before, it had been done by humans for several centuries. A more advanced example would be in postal systems where robots now do all the sorting and distribution of mails.
Secondly, let's take the example of a calculator. It was a tool used to aid humans in calculating faster but the computation speed of these devices is colossal as compared to the computation speed of a human. The calculator was just a simple tool that was developed long back and humans have come a long way from there. Also, current research in the field of quantum mechanics to create quantum computers might hold the key to the future of mankind. Quantum computers are far more advanced than the PC's that is currently being used across the world. With the integration of artificial intelligence and quantum computers, it is theoretically possible to create an intelligent machine superior to a human and thus leading to the creation of a new species.
To conclude, one-day, machines may be superior to the human mind. One might say that even though it is superior, it is still controlled by a human and hence its always the human mind that is superior. However, with the
introduction of artificial intelligence, humans have created robots with a higher degree of autonomy, consequently leading them to make their own decisions and make changes as they see fit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'machine'
Suggestion: machine
...ce, there also comes the question, will machines become superior to humans one day? Also...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: LEARN_NNNNS_ON_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to'?
Suggestion: to
...he way humans perceive and learn things through experience and how the neurons in the b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, whereas, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8679245283 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65097277228 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521226415094 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1474801093 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238480677278 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769500796291 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623413596905 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129410844977 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677115257147 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.