If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Life is like a continuous race which starts from our birth and ends with death. In our small lifetime, most of us have certain goals in life which they want to persue by any means. The promt argues that one can reach any level to obtain a goal if it seems worthy of it. Although, the statament may be plausible in some cases, I don’t fully agree with the statement because of two reasons.
Firstly, the definition of goal may vary from person to person and this means the actions relating to attaining goal by someone may cause distress to others. If we would have lived in an ideal world, all of our goals would be something positive, something which is also beneficiery to others. Sadly, the world we live in is quite cruel and that is one the reasons for considering the boundaries while running for achieving a goal. For example, it is universally true that the main goal of businesses is to earn profit. If the businessmen determine to earn profit by any means by decreasing the cost of production, that may be result into labour exploitation, environment pollution, etc. The cheap labour cases in the low income countries are the results of this mindset. Thus, despite the importance and lucrativeness of a goal, it is important to consider other peoples case too while working for attaining it.
Secondly, if the idea that anything is justified for achieving a goal is actually followed by everyone, it may cause moral degradation. The concept of healthy competion will be extinct in this case. For instance, based on this idea, one may harm, or even kill the opponent to win a business competion or getting the deal of his dream. However, killing of someone can never be justified desptite the reason of it. From history, we find cases of several bloody battles that had taken place in different time periods for achieving the goal of the emperor and mostly in those battles, the common people lost their life. These unfortunate events can’t be justified despite the magnitute of the output of these wars. That means, the idea of doing anything for achiving a goal is not a very healthy one in teerms of moral perspective.
On the other hand, in some events, pushing the boundaries is important to have the output. In many past events, we have seen several magnificient results have came out due to determination of a leader of the country. The idea of reaching all boundaries also work as a great drive for anyone to move ahead in life and prosper in their respective areas.
In conclusion, although it is significant to be strongly motivated to do all sorts of efforts for reaching the goal, it is also important to remember that the continous thirst for winning should not adversely affect anyone and shouldn’t cause any hamr to one’s moral characteristics.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had lived'?
Suggestion: had lived
...one may cause distress to others. If we would have lived in an ideal world, all of our goals wou...
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Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f our goals would be something positive, something which is also beneficiery to o...
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Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... seen several magnificient results have came out due to determination of a leader of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2300.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6705394123 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51966873706 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.370642008 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.545454545 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9545454545 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22727272727 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204540537957 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545821504002 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532730894916 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962286128414 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05888836657 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.