People who go to live in other countries, should follow the customs and tradition of the new country. To What extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many student are traveling to the new country for education purpose and also other people for their business work. But some might accept tradition of that country and others will not. I believe in accepting tradition and custom of new country whenever we travel as a visitor or as a living purpose.
Firstly, many students or business people live in other country to seek knowledge and to run business. They live their atleast for 4 to 5 years, but while living there they should accept the culture and tradition of that country as well as they should respect it. This will also help us to involve in society where we can feel familiar and safe. Respecting other's culture will also come back to us only, whenever they come to our country. Accepting new tradition will also helps in doing business in those country. Like whenever colossal companies come to India, they first do analysis of market and understand the tradition, according to that they launch business by doing some changes in current business or product.
Secondly, some people might believing that accepting and respecting other's tradition will disdain their own's religion. This kind of feeling always leads to conflict and end-up by war. Like there are some religions that won't accept any other tradition and consider themselves as a superior and to dominate other religion they fight with them in each and every way. Some people are also afraid about accepting new tradition will leads into forgetting our owns, there might be chance that next generation will not remember there's own tradition.
In a nutshell, We are a normal people struggling for successful life and while this arduous struggle we need to connect with others. To connect with someone's heart we need to accept them and respect them completely. Accepting and respecting there's culture, tradition, customs, language will be the first aspect to be a cosmopolitan. Having myopic mindset will not make us going to give fruitful life. Hence, if you want to live there jovially then accept there's religion and tradition firstly but never forget own's tradition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many students
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...changes in current business or product. Secondly, some people might believing th...
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Suggestion: lead
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05730659026 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46348027552 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492836676218 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7052033559 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0555555556 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19854696499 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722226148735 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533675282496 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129266285367 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439584472462 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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