The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves

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VIn a world where everyone is connected,how could one get lonely?.The fast life ent...
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... is connected,how could one get lonely?.The fast life enthrall many but also helps ...
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...ut also helps many.consider the internet,the mobile,the one-touch cab and one-touch ...
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...ch cab and one-touch texting and gaming.Such features of this life is assisting to m...
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...sisting to many but can degrade someone also.Since this easiness makes one lazy or l...
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...ng to many but can degrade someone also.Since this easiness makes one lazy or lifeles...
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...this easiness makes one lazy or lifeless,its absence would be far worse,as we discus...
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...as we discuss in the following examples.Thus we can say that the fast life is a boon...
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...ast life is a boon and we must consider the its implications rather than its degrading ...
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...tions rather than its degrading nature. we consider a businessman in 1980s who has...
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...ading nature. we consider a businessman in 1980s who has spent a lot of time searching i...
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...g on things which could waste his energy,the businessman can now divert that energy ...
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...t only helps him work on things he cares,but his vision will be transpired from idea...
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...m ideas to reality in a lot less effort.The rapid pace of life is a boon for those ...
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...s or books for knowledge about anything.Concluding we can say this pace is great for someo...
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...aste around a lot of energy. For example , a boy who spends around a lot of time o...
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... or usage of any other apps on the phone,will eventually give in to the fast paced li...
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...give in to the fast paced life and would,no doubt become a numb kid.The reason for ...
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...fe and would,no doubt become a numb kid.The reason for these consequences maybe var...
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...son for these consequences maybe varying ,but the availability of on demand videos...
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...o the phone thereby affecting his grades,his interests at school and his limited vis...
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...d his limited vision of the future. Thus,the rapid availability of on demand enterta...
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...te the bad nature of this on demand life,consider an example of a girl who is new in town...
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...erences or meeting someone elses family.The girl,not knowing anyone in the city can...
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...rity will also increase because of that.Thus the fast paced life may affect some but...
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...so secure someone. Concluding we can say,that the rapid pace of life maybe dangerous ...
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...id pace of life maybe concerning to some,but its absence would be a lot worse for so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, as to, for example, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2335.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71717171717 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79133555988 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 82.0 23.0359550562 356% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.205817571 60.3974514979 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 389.166666667 118.986275619 327% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 82.5 23.4991977007 351% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.21951772744 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 38.0 7.80617977528 487% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126159776512 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065958200315 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281653406063 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126159776512 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.1 14.1392134831 298% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.29 48.8420337079 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 12.1743820225 280% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.28 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.24 8.38706741573 134% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.8 11.2143820225 310% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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