An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The development organization believes that the new variety of millet with high content of vitamin A is the solution to the challenge faced by the impoverished population of Tagus. However, the argument does not present a cogent case to promote the new breed of millets as the organization has based its recommendation on many unwarranted assumptions.
The premise that the deficient citizens of the nation would readily accept the engineered millet into their diet is not substantiated by any data or survey. The organization needs to factor in the receptibility of new variety of the crop by the population by conducting surveys and spreading awareness of its benefits. It is human psychology to be apprehensive about such new development. Therefore, any reservations in the minds of the hesitant individuals should be addressed by the team involved with the project.
The organization should also mention whether there are any initial temporary or permanent side effects of including this new variety of millets in one's diet. The concerns of sceptics should be answered backed with some credible results in order to eliminate any resistance against the improved millets.
The organization is of the opinion that the farmers may be unwilling to grow the new variety on account of high costs for seeds but other factors shall also be given due consideration. The demand for the crop and other special requirements, if any, while sowing should also be addressed. It might be possible that despite the government's efforts of promotion the farmers may be opposed to cultivate the genetically engineered crop due to uncertainty of market demand and the probability of earning profits on its sale.
Further, the organization should support the claim that the new variety of millets would cure or abate the symptoms of vitamin A deficiency to a significant extent by some data analysed by it. In the event of lack of such evidence, a section of the population is likely to remain apprehensive is accepting the new variety and the purpose of the entire activity may turn out to be futile.
Therefore, the recommendation provided by the international firm is rife with holes and should be justified with reliable sources and data.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sistance against the improved millets. The organization is of the opinion that the...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... shall also be given due consideration. The demand for the crop and other special r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 363.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13774104683 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06027253801 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512396694215 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1712618523 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.214285714 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321863410796 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109666824417 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749837077155 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155994064159 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772248237423 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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