It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is said that it is more detrimental to ignore our beliefs than to adhere to them. I agree with this point of view.
“Compromising” means that different people with various ideas converse with each other and then some individuals give up part of their demand or belief. This situation usually does not have a desirable outcome, as most of the time in this condition, some people force themselves to accept something that they do not believe in. In other words, these people ignore their opinions and follow some beliefs blindly regardless of whether they accept them or not. Compromising with someone’s beliefs can cause individuals to lose their self-confidence and self-reliance. For example, in a company, an employee may disagree with one of the business politics of their boss (it may be immoral) but due to different reasons, they are not enough brave to stand against their boss. So, they have no choice but to accept and follow it. In this situation, the person may lose his/her respect and even honesty because they learn to imitate the wrong beliefs that they compromised on.
I believe that people should not ignore their opinions and beliefs, and they have to try to adhere to them. Adhering to ideas means that people do not try to accept a belief that is imposed on them, especially, when they know that it is wrong. They always pursue their beliefs. Such people may sometimes accept others’ ideas but they have this courage to leave these ideas whenever they become against their acceptable principles. This is because these people have respect for themselves and know that if they want to have the respect of others, at first they need to venerate themselves.
In conclusion, in my view, people must protect their confidence and personality by adhering to their ideas as long as they are right.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 309.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92233009709 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63246279956 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511326860841 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0624998231 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0925153462945 0.243740707755 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459982808277 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432960738968 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082668676276 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640484555915 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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