It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
Heroes are people who have a profound effect on society or have done something that changes the way of life of a particular society dramatically in a motion that develops those societies. In the prompt, the writer asserts that it is impossible to call someone who is still alive regardless of his/her gender a hero. However, I strongly disagree with the author and I believe that still there are many people around us who can be regarded as heroes.
Historically, we are taught that heroes are no longer among us since they sacrificed their lives for the betterment of our society and country. For example, a martyr, who had lost his life to defend his country, is definitely a hero, who passed away. But that does not mean that every hero is gone or, that to be a hero one must sacrifice his/her life. Again, some may think that the world is now in a position where we have no need for heroes, but, in fact, we always need heroes and most often heroes are ignored. However, both of the aforementioned cases are not entirely true.
First of all, no one needs to die to be a hero, there are so many people around us who are always doing heroic things. For example, the firefighters, in times of emergency or a massive inflammation these people are always there for our help. They do not hesitate to come whenever it is needed. Similarly, the Police force of a country can be regarded as heroes since they are the first line of defence for civil people. Therefore, there are a lot of men and women who are living with us and, at the same time, they are doing heroic jobs for the sake of us and our society.
An even more significant example could be our parents, whose painstaking responsibility of raising us is always ignored by us. Firstly, our mother had to bear the immense pain of giving birth. Without them we could not be in the air of earth. If they were afraid of being pregnant our societies would never advance to this stage. Similarly, in a patriarchal society, the father is responsible for maintaining the whole family. The man needs to bear all the costs of his wife, children, parents etc. Consider, a low-income country, and it is very difficult to manage all the costs there. However, despite the harsh situation and lack of adequate earnings, they do not leave their family. Moreover, they try their best and sometimes exceed their limit to hold the family together. Therefore it will be unjust to ignore them as heroes, the father and mother.
In conclusion, it can be said that heroes may die but the need for heroes is not finished and there are a great number of heroes among us. But the problem is that we do not recognize them usually, as they are very familiar to us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...em we could not be in the air of earth. If they were afraid of being pregnant our ...
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Line 4, column 779, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...heir limit to hold the family together. Therefore it will be unjust to ignore them as her...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2211.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 488.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53073770492 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4851809853 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497950819672 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4883516568 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.44 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.52 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.24 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165357237216 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458518839148 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03876824092 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996125388107 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276769896256 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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