It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement
and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position,
you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these
considerations shape your position.
There have been many ongoing debate whether the society we live will define ourselves or not.The author of the statement asserts that a person define themselves by the identification with social groups. There is a term called "Social Animals" which refers to us "The Humans", and moreover a society defines the way how a person should behave and live. I strongly support the author's statement for the following reasons.
To begin, People live in a society that is nothing but a group of people who accepts to live by a unified norms in terms of culture, traditions, mentality to name a few. Thus a
person on choosing a society will define his day to day chores and if not he will be ousted out of the society he lives in. Consider the country which has a law that punishes those who throws garbage onto the streets for example, A person living in those country should adhere to the law of not throwing the trash onto the streets unless until he wants to be punished by the society. The Punishment may involve jail terms which implicitly means that he is being ousted out of the society temporarily. Thus this example shows us that a person who chooses a society should concord to the norms of the society in order to be in the society.
Furthermore, A society we live, will implicitly have its own impact on one's without their conscience. There is a old famous saying that goes "Birds of same feather flocks together" which says people of same team behave in unison. Consider a group of friends for example, if the group has 5 friends, out of which 4 members loves going out and are extroverts, A person joining the 5th member of the group as an introvert will surely have the effects of other extroverts in the group and the behavior of the introvert will at least change a bit towards being open and extrovert. This shows that a society we live in will at least unconsciously, if not consciously have its impact on defining our attitudes and behaviors.
Some may argue by asserting that a person with strong determined will, surely would not change his behavior inspite of how the society impacts individually. According to this view, If a person who eat processed food alone lives in jungle, despite of how hungry he is, he would still not eat anything other than processed food. This is not so true unless he would like to waste his life. In essence A society determines the individual's behavior either consciously or unconsciously and it is the responsibility of an individual to choose his/her society wisely otherwise they would find themselves chisled and restructured by the norms of a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77510917031 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75693304445 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475982532751 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7399546539 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6875 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111950098196 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414423410235 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402396275112 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658823117358 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484677328568 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.