The main objective of education is to procure a job.
Nowdays as education is also being considered as one of the basic needs like food,shelter,clothing.Education is also being considered vital in todays world.With out education it is going to be critical for a man to survive.
Education is being used in a very significant manner nowdays,because if we are educated we can know get to tackle the real word situations without any adult's help required. For instance if a new 20-21 year old kid moves out of his house for the sake of finiding job , even if they are are not educated it becomes them difficult to tackle the situations on their own . We can say due to education and knowledge a person can communicate or thing in much wider and creative way.And it even boosts our confidence .Which he can hence forth use in his job also to work smartly and efficently rather then working in dull way.He can figure out things easil.If the individual had more knowledge about that situation. He will learn everytime new ways and solution to tackle the problem.
We take education not just to procure a job, but also to work in your daily life in efficient way. We will know how to use a technology only if we know about that technology or get to read or understand the manual of the technology, for that we need to have basic information or we should be literate for that. In our day to day life using Microwaves or Cars or Phones etc, for uneducated people it becomes very difficult for them to use these technology. which have become basic need and without these you can not function nowdays.Where as one of our main objective to educated is get a job too. But rather than securing a job to function it Today's world education is very important for each and every human being.
Thus, summing up from all our points we can say that not only for procuring a job but also for tackling the daily life situation and to function we need to get basic education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56725146199 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95311639298 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1443611772 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0909090909 23.4991977007 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230557760511 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100886639787 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865987022945 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135611604032 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486912290036 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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