Many important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
From the stone-age to this age, humans have evolved a lot. In fact, it’s inventions and discoveries that made us superior to the other animals in this Earth. While some discoveries and inventions are by accidents, others mostly are by the sincere efforts of the people towards it. So, in my opinion, I mostly disagree with the prompt above.
To begin, sometimes, the discoveries are made by accidents. In other words, it is by lucky chance, the things are discovered. For instance, the Radium which was discovered by Marie Curie was by fortune. She was curious of the glowing thing- Radium. She eventually found that was due to Radioactivity. She was awarded with novel prize for this discovery. It was vital for the cure of cancer. Therefore, it is sometimes by lucky chance, discoveries are made.
However, in most of the cases, the inventions and discoveries were the results of the assiduous effort to find the truth underlying beneath it. For instance, the discovery made by Newton was not fortuitous. Rather, it was his keen interest to find the cause beneath the falling of apple on his head. Similarly, the Newton’s laws of motion are also result of his deep and careful study.
Like Newton’s, Right brothers’ invention of plane was due to their persistent effort to accomplish it. They made successful flight in the third attempt. Their dream to fly in sky like the birds was fulfilled because of their diligent work. Moreover we can take the discoveries of the great scientist Albert Einstein. All of his discoveries including General Theory of Relativity, Photo-electric effect, and so on are the outcomes of the careful experimentation and research.
In sum, sometimes it is true that discoveries and inventions are result of accidents like in case of Marie Curie , but in most of the cases these are the result of sincere and careful effort for its accomplishment- like Newton’s and Einstein’s- as mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ly found that was due to Radioactivity. She was awarded with novel prize for this d...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'resulted'.
Suggestion: resulted
...y, the Newton’s laws of motion are also result of his deep and careful study. Like Ne...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...lfilled because of their diligent work. Moreover we can take the discoveries of the grea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty, Photo-electric effect, and so on are the outcomes of the careful experimentat...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of accidents like in case of Marie Curie , but in most of the cases these are the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the result of sincere and careful effort for its accomplishment- like Newton’s an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shment- like Newton’s and Einstein’s- as mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, third, while, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04024767802 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90901242689 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4617726192 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6818181818 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0636419128106 0.243740707755 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212770833726 0.0831039109588 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022611473693 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0361332913605 0.150359130593 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173664596297 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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