Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks
Men and Women are equally suited to each other in almost all the tasks except few in which each have a specific advantage over other.We can justify the statement by considering our daily activities as examples and hence we can come to a broader perspective.
For example, let us first consider the tasks in which men have an advantage over women.Men usually are suitable in involving themselves in arduous physical tasks compared to women.They can carry heavy masses with ease compared to women and also in driving where the flexibility of body perhaps helps them to react quickly during times.When coming to women this varies completely as they show up their calm and composure in doing tasks and involve themselves in higher state than men.The tasks which they are superior to men will be like all household activities from decorating things to cooking food to running a home.All these activities are to be done at a greater concentration and hence calm and composure plays a great role here and hence they master those areas.
However, this also depends on the hormones generated by the two different genders and the functions of the released hormones will also play a major difference in the way they perform tasks.This proves that we cannot just simply say that men and women are not equally suited for many tasks.They can perform all the tasks if given a case but the way they perform compared to other might differ based on the task and that is due to their internal complexion of the body.
Hence, we can bring it up to a point that men and women are mastering their things in their own peculiar way and if given a chance to enter an arena completely different to both they are even showing up their ability in performing it but with less ease compared to others.Even history has lot of things related to this as the way men and women function their minds and play out things effectively.
We can conclude the above statement with a generalised statement which says, Men and Women are equally mastered in their own way in performing tasks but there are few areas but not many in which we can see a major difference in the way each of them perform.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70526315789 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50729683048 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484210526316 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 23.0359550562 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.273843112 60.3974514979 312% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 357.6 118.986275619 301% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.0 23.4991977007 323% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.21951772744 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290259753545 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16774528111 0.0831039109588 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025320352706 0.0758088955206 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16774528111 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025320352706 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.8 14.1392134831 274% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.8 48.8420337079 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 12.1743820225 261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 11.2143820225 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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