The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
I agree to the point that young people who are interested in leadership should be instilling a sense of cooperation but they should be equally having the skill of competition developed in them.
For example if we consider a top industry in the market which is in cooperation with its alliances for a period of time but when those alliances start growing up by adapting to conditions and start to race themselves in the market one will obviously be facing a competition in the market and they should be using their ability to tackle it.
However mostly sticking to cooperation alone without competition is not a helping hand for any individual who is in a leadership position of any firm or government or any other fields as they both go hand in hand and skills should be developed by them right from childhood on how to handle the situation..
Hence we can conclude stating that cooperation and competition are two major skills required for any individual in growing world as they both go hand in hand. Younger people should learn how to utilise these skills and when to use them . On doing so they become successful and progress themselves in their respective department.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...be using their ability to tackle it. However mostly sticking to cooperation alone wi...
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...childhood on how to handle the situation.. Hence we can conclude stating that c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 2235.4752809 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81773399015 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78977991467 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556650246305 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 704.065955056 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.5814853385 60.3974514979 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.0 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8333333333 23.4991977007 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.21951772744 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166391728218 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794369969612 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477842626754 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106517935168 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298071120713 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 100.480337079 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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