"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should, therefore, allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
Yes,I agree to the point that people watching good movies in theatres is decreasing now a day's due to heavy online content which is providing free access for viewers to enjoy those movies by sitting at home.
However,movie makers should consider this issue as equally important to that of making a movie. When a good movie is made it should be available to public of all kind. When a big movie is made the ticket pricing is hiked as to gain the profits but considering profits alone will result in a decline of public interest towards those movies. Middle class people can't afford to spend a big amount of money on a movie and hence they go for alternative source as Internet and hence the graph comes down.
Moreover,the special content in the movies should be known to public by repeated advertising or online trailer cuts which would grab their attention and hence they can expect a huge number of viewers. Now a days social media has been the primary key for society to get to know any major news and hence by practicing some events like giveaway gifts or lucky contests or jump the queue contests across all the cities will make the advertising and promotion of the movie even higher and that might result in huge number of people watching the movie.
Hence,we can clearly state that making a movie alone without proper advertisement will not reach the number of public they expect. While making the movie they should also plan to setup things which would equally bring a hike talk among public. On doing so ,by the end of the movie making public will be in a position to reach out to theatres to enjoy the moments. This will obviously increase the viewers as well as the profits.
We can conclude that making a movie with proper content and advertising to make people aware of what the movie actually is will bring them a huge success as many viewers will be likely to watch it.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 342 350
No. of Characters: 1529 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.3 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.471 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.192 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 104 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 55 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.426 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.394 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.657 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.132 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
Yes,I agree to the point that people watching...
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Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...g good movies in theatres is decreasing now a days due to heavy online content which is pr...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , movie
...se movies by sitting at home. However,movie makers should consider this issue as eq...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly important to that of making a movie. When a good movie is made it should be avail...
^^^^
Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...wards those movies. Middle class people cant afford to spend a big amount of money o...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... hence the graph comes down. Moreover,the special content in the movies should be...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ey can expect a huge number of viewers. Now a days social media has been the primary key f...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...an expect a huge number of viewers. Now a days social media has been the primary key f...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...r of people watching the movie. Hence,we can clearly state that making a movie a...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...reach the number of public they expect. While making the movie they should also plan ...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
... making the movie they should also plan to setup things which would equally bring a hike...
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Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng a hike talk among public. On doing so ,by the end of the movie making public wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 2260.96107784 69% => OK
No of words: 338.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62426035503 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2851903235 2.78398813304 82% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51775147929 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.913378356 57.8364921388 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 119.503703932 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 23.324526521 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 5.70786347227 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106088303985 0.218282227539 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463921704462 0.0743258471296 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195420793084 0.0701772020484 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691415200643 0.128457276422 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00928520984678 0.0628817314937 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 48.3550499002 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 12.197005988 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 98.500998004 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.