In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Imagination, is a powerful skill that pushes the boundaries of limited thoughts of an individual and encourages him to think out of the box.Almost all of the major discoveries and scientific advancements today are based on strong imaginative powers and the will to change the world.Surely, knowledge is a significant factor towards advancement in any field in general,but it is the imaginative skills that bolsters the determination to achieve the goals.Therefore I fundamentally agree with the author's claim that in most of the professions and academics, imagination is more important than knowledge.
Firstly, imagination leads a person to think differently and uniquely and this is what primarily determines one's success in that particular field.For instance, a scientist like Galilio had no means to travel to the space during his era.But it was only through his imagination accompanied with some basic knowledge in his field that led him to expand his boundaries of thoughts and imagine about an infinite universe.Thus imagining about the entire universe led to his theories about the movement of various celestial bodies which was considered to be a major scientific breakthrough at that time.An artist uses his imagination to depict paintings that reflect social conditions existing in the society.This in turn, has a greater impact on the people's lives by influencing them and making them aware of the social conditions existing around them.In the current scenario,it is the scientists and biologists who have imagined a world free of pandemic which has led them to the creation of vaccines.The availability of vaccines have helped save millions of lives from this brutal pandemic .Thus it can also be concluded that imagination often leads to fruitful results that may help in development of a society.
Furthermore, imagination can also help to strengthen the basic knowledge about any subject and inspire to achieve more excellence in any field.For example, when education is imparted to students without any scope of improving their imagination, then it often becomes monotonous and boring to study different subjects.Consider, a history class where students are forced to read facts from textbooks.This would limit their minds to those facts only and would deteriorate their thinking capabilities.But if the same facts were woven in the form of stories,allowing the students to create an imagery in their minds about any incident from the past,then that would have a greater impact on thier minds and it would incite even deeper interest among them to learn more about the subject.Students can understand and absorb certain mathematical concepts relating to 3D figures and shapes, better if they are encouraged to create to visual imagery in their minds about the objects and then solve the problems related to it.
However, in contrast to the above statement, in certain situations,it is an improved skillset and extreme knowledge of a subject, that is going to help the individual to tackle any problem. For example, consider a situation of emergency such as a building that is set on fire. In this case, it would be prudent for the firefighters to use their knowledge to extinguish the fire. Deliberating over the matter and using imagination to deal with the situation in this case, would only exacerbate the situation.Thus in the cases of emergencies and exigency it is often the knowldege and not imagination that comes into use.
To sum up,although knowledge is essential in determining one's progress in any field,but it is only the imagination that can define the uniqueness of that individual and lead to his progress and advancement towards success and excellence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in contrast, in general, such as, in contrast to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 95.0 58.6224719101 162% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2945.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 550.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35454545455 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23355802803 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501818181818 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 932.4 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 91.0 23.0359550562 395% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 346.087858145 60.3974514979 573% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 490.833333333 118.986275619 413% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 91.6666666667 23.4991977007 390% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.5 5.21951772744 546% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138974973611 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732661995509 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355632547612 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793428392269 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368080049094 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.6 14.1392134831 351% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -29.35 48.8420337079 -60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 7.92365168539 268% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.0 12.1743820225 329% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.49 8.38706741573 149% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 100.480337079 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.5 11.8971910112 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.4 11.2143820225 342% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 50.0 11.7820224719 424% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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