A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how those examples shape your position.
The statement mention that a nation should make it mandatory for all students to pass same classes before college which is understandable; however, there should be some options for students to let them to take their favorite subjects.
Obviously, it is necessary to have a basic knowledge of all different classes before entering the college which can make students confident. All students should understand math, biology, chemistry, politic, and all other courses before college education. For example, it is good to know about politics and government system which can make students to be able to vote and to know how the government system works.
Additionally, it is beneficial for higher education level students to learn different courses before finishing high school, so they will be able to save some times to relax. For example, clinical nutrition major students who already know chemistry and statistic are more successful to pass advanced nutrition classes. Thus, learning statistic and chemistry in high school is useful for them to learn faster in college. Also, same national curriculum helps all students for college entree exam for math, English, and chemistry because everybody needs to pass it.
However, it is not always necessary to have same classes for all students before college. A nation should let students to select some classes based on their interests during high school. Because it can let students to focus on their favorite classes and to be more confidence when entering the college. Having same classes can be frustrating for students. They might even loose passion about going to the college by getting bored with studying. Imagine a student who is interested in art and not interested in chemistry, but required to pass chemistry classes. It can be a wasting of time for that student which can cause a hard time studying for him/her.
As a conclusion, all students should not be required to take same classes until they finish high school because some lessons should be elective which can let students to be more educated about their passion and to be more knowledgeable college students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17101449275 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65069888499 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440579710145 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5205890276 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2036142577 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810783643513 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549568776203 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145615769413 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350075651549 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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