In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement mentions that in any situation, hearing opposite thoughts will make progress. I agree with the prompt because hearing other's opinions will always make us to think about all outcome possibilities which can be beneficial.
First of all, when people hear about contrasting points, it is definitely going to open their minds to the situation. Thus, they can choose the best options or solutions to continue their goals or to improve the situation. Imagine a student who is under pressure and is studying for GRE exam. He or she just thinks about getting high grades from analytical writing part without paying attention to his/her writing methods. After while she gets frustrated with writing and still not getting good scores in practice exams because she wants to write perfectly but she does not pay attention to the time restriction in exam. But when she talks to one of her English professors, she figures it out that it is better to try to write an even non perfect essay in thirty minutes and try to write better essays eventually by more and more practicing.
In addition, when people listen to the opposite views, they can be more experienced and knowledgeable person. Also, they can even improve their personalities. For example, an older boyfriend can advise her girlfriend that buying a very expensive dress is not necessary. Instead, she can buy two dresses by same amount of money or even save her rest of the money. Thus, a girlfriend can make a better decision in that situation.
On the contrary, some people may believe that having discussions about contrasting view is wasting their times which can be true in some cases. For example, when a woman does not want to keep the baby whom was created by rape, no contrasting views is going to stop her decision.
Surely people will benefit from hearing opposite views because it can open their minds to become a better decision maker for improvement in any situation.
- All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children s schools Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and sup 50
- Some people believe that in order to thrive a society must put its own overall success before the well being of its individual citizens Others believe that the well being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of all its people Write a r 50
- Some people believe that in order to thrive a society must put its own overall success before the well being of its individual citizens Others believe that the well being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of all its people Write a r 50
- Some people believe that in order to thrive a society must put its own overall success before the well being of its individual citizens Others believe that the well being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of all its people Write a r 50
- Some people believe that in order to thrive a society must put its own overall success before the well being of its individual citizens Others believe that the well being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of all its people Write a r 58
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, so, still, thus, while, for example, in addition, first of all, in some cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89696969697 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60108051292 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551515151515 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.274534159 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1270271396 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432104835069 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402253015394 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818104790191 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444132115052 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.