A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
here it is said that students in each and every state should study the same subjects through out the nation. I disagree with this statement because each and every state has different languages as mother tongue. So it should be the choice of the parents and students to pursue the curriculum they need.
Coming to the example if we take india there are 29 different states and their mother tongue varies from state to state.
some of the north states has hindi as mother tongue and some of the southern states like andhra pradesh has Telugu as their native language and similarly tamil nadu has tamil as their mother tongue.so in th curriclum central government includes hindi as a mandatory subject curriculum it will be easy for the people in the northern part and it is difficultt for the people in states like andhra pradesh and tamilnadu.Similar proposal was made in india that hindi should be mandatory states like tamilnadu has opposed this and said that hindi is not necessary for us.
Although if the students in the nation study under similar curriclum it would be easy for them while writing the competitive exams and also if they entering the college to pursue their graduation they will have the same knowledge of other students. In india there boards for each and every state like SSC(state secondary education) and there is central board known as (central board for secondary education) .But the CBSE schools in india are very limited .whereas the schools comes under state board are present in almost every village.
The main issue here is that the preference should be left to the parents to educate their child in a way they like
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ry state should study the same subjects through out the nation. I disagree with this statem...
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...her tongue varies from state to state. some of the north states has hindi as mother tongue...
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...h states has hindi as mother tongue and some of the southern states like andhra pradesh has...
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...rthern part and it is difficultt for the people in states like andhra pradesh and...
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...e CBSE schools in india are very limited .whereas the schools comes under state bo...
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... in india are very limited .whereas the schools comes under state board are present in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, similarly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 284.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82042253521 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36473745635 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475352112676 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.626525623 60.3974514979 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.125 118.986275619 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 23.4991977007 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131869033874 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796637408531 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664700266909 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775417678333 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643245396591 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 48.8420337079 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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