A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
In modern society, the study is an essential process for students to develop their knowledges and learn necessary skills to survive in the rapidly innovated society. In this point of view, some people claim that a nation should provide the same national curriculum of the study to all of its students until they enter college. however, I still not believe that requiring for all students to study the same curriculum will benefit for their real learning.
Undoubtedly, the assumption can be arised that students before entering the college are still young and have insufficient skills to adapt in the society. To curtivate knowledges and surviving skills during the periods of students, a nation should require the same essential study curriculums for all the students to absorb various knowledges and behaviors. When students gain those things in the schools before entering college, they might be reasonable people to live dependently in the society after graduating.
however, every individual in the world have various personalities and characteristics. The personality of individuals should be respected especially in modern society. Since every student has different personalities and talents, a nation should require different study curriculums for each group of students to develop their personal skills. In other words, this way of education should improve one's talents and it would lead to cultivate inventive people who are necessarily needed in the society.
Additionally, various curriculum of study for different students also can be an advantage to develop their creativity which is critical power to develop the future of the nation. A nation should nurture genious people who can lead the nation to the high position in the several fields such as sicence, politics, or economy. creativity is hard to cultivating through the same curriculm of study. Therefore, for developing a nation, providing various curriculm for students is essential.
In conclusion, while some people argue that a nation should provide the same national curriculm for its students until they enter college, I stil believe that to cultivate genious people for the nation and for students' real learning, different and various curriculums should be required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... its students until they enter college. however, I still not believe that requiring for...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... in the society after graduating. however, every individual in the world have var...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s, this way of education should improve ones talents and it would lead to cultivate ...
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Line 10, column 326, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Creativity
... such as sicence, politics, or economy. creativity is hard to cultivating through the same...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51149425287 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85061526667 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459770114943 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3652404556 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.866666667 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49488084173 0.243740707755 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175513515069 0.0831039109588 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157984563062 0.0758088955206 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32050536721 0.150359130593 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107398731578 0.0667264976115 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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