A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
There is a very famous proverb in Hindi that translates as follows: "For a piece of gold to purify, it has to go through the scorching heat from fire." In order to refine one's skills, in order to grow as a person, holistically, one has to endure a seemingly arduous journey. it is the journey, not the destination, that teaches a person a lot of themselves and provides ample opportunities to make oneself capable to accept success. I completely agree with the claim that the most valuable lessons in life are learnt during the period of struggle and hardships. Achieving the goal is just the cherry on top of the cake. I present the following reasons to support my stance.
More often, it is us who are the biggest obstacle for our own progress. The Duning-Kruger effect is an example of this. confident and capable people feel less confident about their skills and assume certains goals are just unachievable for them. Such people, if they choose to fight the struggle with their internal timidity, they will learn the importance and skill of using one's self confidence to remove the self imposed problems in their life. No matter how much one listens about the importance of self confidence, it is only when one discovers its ability to overcome the problems in times of struggle, realizes it actual importance.
when we fight our limitations, we utilize everything that we have, be it physical or mental strength. But when the obstacles seem stronger than us, we realize that we lack something. it is at this moment, life tries to teach the most valuable lessons. it is only through quiet introspection that one can identify what one is lacking. Once it is identified, its a lesson that we won't forget for life. success creates a very happy image of us and the world around us. we are blinded by our joy and fail to see the things that are lacking in and around us. A valuable lesson is the one that tells us about what we lacked at the first place, and the wisdom isn't showered on the one who isn't looking.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...eat from fire.' In order to refine ones skills, in order to grow as a person, h...
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Suggestion: It
... to endure a seemingly arduous journey. it is the journey, not the destination, th...
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Suggestion: Confident
...ng-Kruger effect is an example of this. confident and capable people feel less confident ...
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Suggestion: When
...le, realizes it actual importance. when we fight our limitations, we utilize ev...
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Suggestion: It
... us, we realize that we lack something. it is at this moment, life tries to teach ...
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Suggestion: It
...ies to teach the most valuable lessons. it is only through quiet introspection tha...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... one is lacking. Once it is identified, its a lesson that we wont forget for life. ...
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Suggestion: Success
... a lesson that we wont forget for life. success creates a very happy image of us and th...
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...cked at the first place, and the wisdom isnt showered on the one who isnt looking.
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Suggestion: isn't
...the wisdom isnt showered on the one who isnt looking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67597765363 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62680352349 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.6995908104 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72222222222 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.037446096014 0.243740707755 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0122094049589 0.0831039109588 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0206258379112 0.0758088955206 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0271403818191 0.150359130593 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112468463531 0.0667264976115 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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