A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer.”
Home is the first school and mother is the first teacher for a child. But we can never forget that every child has its own grasping potential and everyone is unique. The prompt puts a direct focus on the notion that curriculum for every student should be same until someone enters college. However, It is unfair to emphasize only a part of the prompt and not considering the other. I do not totally agree with the prompt. Some exceptional cases still linger, which makes me partially agreed to this topic. The reasons are:
Firstly, Geographical challenge is one such factor that changes many variables for the teaching for the time being to be valid or invalid. For instance, Any student in rural part of a developing country like Nepal is deprived of major facilities and is being provided the same curriculum as the elite kids in Kathmandu, How will it be fair if he is being taught the basic skills for a city area where he should be learning major skills for sustaining his or her life, He should be given some technical eductation so that he could live his life by any means.
Secondly, any student should be given the education about his time and situation .Apj Abdul Kalam once said- teaching is a noble profession, that shapes the character calibre and future of an individual. Say a child is born disabled. How is he supposed to cope with the other childs? like the sayng teaching should seem fair to shapr the child according to his calibre and secure his future.
Lastly however, If same curriculum is not taught any entrance exam or a job interview will not be fair. The entrance exam to be fair should take all students equally. For instance, if a child wants to get into a prestigious college like Harvard, and he is not givena fair education he will not make it any way. So to be exact, A fair entrance exam will only consider every student equal. Which makes us realize the importance of a fair education.
However, One might argue that if fair same curriculum is not taught it wont be fair. This statement might hold water until someone points out the fact that, IF that will be so, Messi or Ronaldo wont be born ever and they will be confined to study somewhere. Thus leaving me partially agreed to this topic.
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- A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer 58
- curriculum for every student should be same until someone enters college 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40744158808 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.6701111509 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10517326107 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360624153963 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366216082897 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645853636833 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276556697084 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.