A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Keeping in consideration the fact that each individual student has different ability and interest a nation should not require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Most of the education system in world at present require all of its students to study the same curriculum throughout school level. This might not be the best approach to take, for example every student has unique sets of apt,creativity and comprehension capacity. If a student interested in music is forced to learn the chemical formula of Urea,will he be interested? This approach leads to developing the rote memorisation culture for obtaining grades.By the time when a student is about to reach college his creativity,passion for his field might get already faded which infact is a great waste and tragidy for student,society and government.
Instead if the school level curriculum is flexible enough to meet the specifc interest of students then this will certainly lead to the prosperity of nation as by the time student reaches colleges he/she had been already honed skilled in their interested field of study and thus young students can join economic work force early.
Furthermore a same curriculum might not be suitable for students coming from different culture and ethnicity and geography. Also the fact that a bird's ability of flying should not be judged from the fact how well it can swim.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 33
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers 50
- An international development organization in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A While seeds for this new type of millet cost more farmers will be paid 52
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... can join economic work force early. Furthermore a same curriculum might not be suitable...
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...ity and geography. Also the fact that a birds ability of flying should not be judged ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 231.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15151515152 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88922042864 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580086580087 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.9150789408 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.75 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39068648946 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172859388239 0.0831039109588 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198058733553 0.0758088955206 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2729548672 0.150359130593 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.219597432568 0.0667264976115 329% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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