A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Having the same national curriculum for all the students until they enter the college, helps students coming from different parts of country to have a good social bonding, since they would have been studying same syllabus, it would be easier for them to express themselves using jargon from their curriculum which otherwise wouldnot be possible.
It also provides a common platform for competitive examinations to evaluate the students since they have read same curriculum, without making question paper biased towards students from some parts of country.
But having the exactly the same curriculum will make all the students grow up with same ideologies, mindset which hinders the diversity. It is also harmful for future of the nation if every people in the country have flock mentality, where decisions are taken with myopic view hindering the progress of a country.
The solution for this problem could be to have some parts of curriculum to be different for different parts of the country.Topics such as mathemtical notations, scientific vocabulary can be common across all of the country since it would create a common ground for students from different parts of country to converse with ease. While other topics suchn as history, politics etc need not have to be common so that students think in diversified manner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve been studying same syllabus, it would be easier for them to express themselves...
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Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the exactly the'. Did you mean 'exactly the'?
Suggestion: exactly the
...om some parts of country. But having the exactly the same curriculum will make all the stude...
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Line 6, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Topics
...rent for different parts of the country.Topics such as mathemtical notations, scientif...
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Line 6, column 205, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...entific vocabulary can be common across all of the country since it would create a common ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 214.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21962616822 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63921080293 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.823054427 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.166666667 118.986275619 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6666666667 23.4991977007 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23000085097 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123581562875 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899416981433 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160330844875 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853281661453 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.