A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

Students are all different --- each with their own goals, ambitions, and talents. As such, educational approaches that are suitable for one student may not be suitable for another. In this essay, I will argue that if the goal of the state is to create the most well-prepared cohort for its educated workforce, then to mandate a standardized, national curriculum for all students to study until they enter college would be strictly suboptimal for two main reasons. I will also present two counterarguments against my advocacy and demonstrate why these counterarguments are invalid.

First, mandating a standardized, national curriculum draws away valuable time that students could have otherwise been using towards developing specialized skills for their intended careers. Consider a student who dreams of becoming an investigative journalist and using her pen and notebook to keep those in power in check. There is no compelling reason for the state to mandate her to take mechanical physics and electricity & magnetism physics, which are two often-required courses in standardized curricula. Such courses will have little to no impact on her becoming a better journalist. At bottom, each student has the same 24 hours per day, but it should be clear that an aspiring physicist should spend her daily 24 hours differently than an aspiring investigative journalist. An hour spent checking a standardized box is an hour not spent honing her investigative journalism skills. From an optimization perspective, our aspiring investigative journalist could have become much better prepared for her future career by taking additional coursework in public speaking, expository writing, and logic. Society would have gained one better-prepared investigative journalist, compared to an investigative journalist who had the first 12 years of her education partitioned away by the whims of the state's compulsory national education.

Furthermore, when our investigative journalist is compelled to take advanced physics along with the rest of her cohort, she may lack the motivation to invest in her physics studies, as, in her mind, her performance and knowledge retention from these courses are simply to check a bureaucratic box, and not towards her own self-actualization. As she compares herself to her physicist classmates, especially after exams or grade releases, she may begin to question her natural, general intelligence, and capacity to contribute towards society. This result would be especially lamentable, given that this advanced physics course was irrelevant towards her dreams. In general, a standardized curriculum has the potential to be devastating on the morale of students who do not exactly fit the profile of the curriculums' intended audience. Specifically, within a sufficiently large population, there will almost certainly be students who are not only polymaths, but also sedulous in all of their studies --- students who would excel in most, if not all, courses packaged in a national curriculum. But what about the other 90% of the student population? What about the other 90% of students who are more focused in their attention and the time they are willing to invest in their studies? What about the students who grew up, for a variety of reasons, with a fear of mathematics, and genuinely found their passion in a different field that is not even tangentially-related to mathematics? Why subject them to more than a decade of time wasted for the sole purpose of ticking a bureaucratic checkbox?

Of course, advocates of a national curriculum may argue that a functioning democracy requires generally-educated voters, which necessitates a standardized national curriculum. I completely agree with the first logical link. Mandating students to take a set sequence of courses -- say, on civics or government -- to build a politically-educated student body is certainly a wise decision. However, there is a strict difference between mandating students take, perhaps, 1-2 common courses during their high school years, and mandating that students study the same national curriculum for 12 years until they enter college. Indeed, requesting that students take 1-2 common courses on civics and government is, in fact, squarely within the scope of my advocacy: courses on civics and government are necessary for any profession, because, in any democratic society, at optima, workers are citizens first.

Moreover, advocates of a national curriculum until students enter college may rebut that students can still pursue their interests and specialize in college, through their chosen majors. However, such advocates overlook the reality that, assuming the absence of graduate studies, each student only has around 12 years of primary education and 4 years of undergraduate college eduation, for a total of 16 years of education. Again, a year spent studying subjects not relevant to a specialization is one lost year that could have been spent on becoming more adept at ones' specialization. From this perspective, time is a limited resource, and it would be in the state's best interest to maximize students' readiness for their future careers.

In sum, if the goal of the state is to create the most well-prepared workforce for all necessary vocations of a society, instead of stymying individuality and imposing a standardized curriculum, it should empower each individual student to take the sets of courses and experience the sets of experiences that best set up each individual student for success in their chosen specialized vocation. This is, by definition, the most optimal allocatio of resources. Doing so also maintains the morale of the incoming workforce, a factor that policymakers would be unwise to ignore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 566, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ve been spent on becoming more adept at ones specialization. From this perspective, ...
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Line 9, column 661, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'states the best'.
Suggestion: states the best
...imited resource, and it would be in the states best interest to maximize students readiness...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, then, well, in fact, in general, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 67.0 33.0505617978 203% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 111.0 58.6224719101 189% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4849.0 2235.4752809 217% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 890.0 442.535393258 201% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44831460674 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.4619472517 4.55969084622 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22420699581 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 408.0 215.323595506 189% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458426966292 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1520.1 704.065955056 216% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 17.0 4.38483146067 388% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.4221902085 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.939393939 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9696969697 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57575757576 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214043669029 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596194633145 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607945389377 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127772028482 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540352503073 0.0667264976115 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 213.0 100.480337079 212% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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