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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Students are the future of any nation and order to make a nation great they should shape the future of the students. The authors statement about same national curriculum taught to entire nations students is completelly agreeable. The students in early stages of their studies should learn same curriculum under luminance of the following factors.

First of all, the initial years of study for the students are very important, as these years provide foundation of basic knowledge to the students for their further studies and also provides inspirations to persue their dreams and follow the path that intrest them.Hence if the nation is give task to decide the curriculum for all the sudents then it would more general in nature and experts form different parts of nation can contribute and currate the common syllabus hence this will cover every aspect of their studies, therefore would be suitable for every student in the nation.

In addition, if their is fixed curriculum for all the student in the nation then it will provide an equal and wide platfrom for the students to compete with other students nation wide. If the curriculum until their collage studies is simialr then it will also be beneficient for students pick and choose any collage around the nation. It will also make addmission process for the collage easier as it would be easier to compare students performance as they have same marking paramaters hence the need off institue specific enterence test would be obsolute, resulting in reduced burden on both the collage and students.

Further more, for a nation wide curriculum addition of some subjects related to the nations history , ethics etc will also help to incure pateriotism and good conduct which can help in makeing the students a good citizen of nation.In conclusion the idea of common curriculum nation wide if implmented correctly then it could help a nation to shape its future to a great extent.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 321.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04049844237 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5046232472 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495327102804 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.190121748 60.3974514979 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.25 118.986275619 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.125 23.4991977007 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.625 5.21951772744 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290681872516 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153934516136 0.0831039109588 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443909650853 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196198133703 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352134396902 0.0667264976115 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 14.1392134831 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this: