A nation should require all of its students to study same national curriculum until they enter college
n this modern era, a nation comprise of different religions, different caste, they belong to different countries, a lot of them are immigrants too. They belong to different cultural background. But the growth of the nation depends on the upcoming youth. There passion, vigor, interest , level of knowledge they possess and determination they posses to change the world. Thus everything rest upon the basic knowledge they learn from school, parents, friends and the society. All these factors counts to the development of the nation. I see there are very few kids who have even excel in technology, sports at a very young age. Man is born with the talent, but its useless without work.
knowledge is the key factor in the role of development. Minds of the children learning in school can be easily molded and enlighten to the best while in the elders , its difficult. Small children's are with the fresh minds. They learn easily as compared to what we teach to elders. Children learn different things from different people during their whole life. But the basic knowledge they learn at school varies. Thus there could be differences in the level of education they gain.
Few kids learn from the best teachers while others struggles to even learn a b c's of life. This is because of the wealth, the parent's knowledge etc. Thus only few kids excel in their life while others are still struggling.
For instance , in India , there's state board and there's international board, kids from state board could not compete with the other international kids as they get a varied experiences, school syllabus, languages. Thus only few kids who can afford those international schools reach highest point of education . While among the state board schools, being cheap as compared to international one's; may be 1% of kids brilliant enough make it to that level. So if the same curriculum is being taught in all the schools, the basic knowledge to grow in future. Thus opportunities for each student to even gain scholarship's in the college that once they they are done with the schooling part; the contribution to nation's development could be huge.
This not only helps kids learn better, this also helps to eradicate poverty , the discrimination between people on the grounds of knowledge, money , racism etc completely. Thus I believe that same curriculum should be brought up in school no matter what's the level of school is and how much wealthy kids come into. A nation grow when the people grow.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269639065817 0.240241500013 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.133757961783 0.157235817809 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0849256900212 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0552016985138 0.0497285424764 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0424628450106 0.0444667217837 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112526539278 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0297239915074 0.0406280797675 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64017405319 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0297239915074 0.030933414821 96% => OK
Particles: 0.00212314225053 0.0016655270985 127% => OK
Determiners: 0.0997876857749 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0148619957537 0.0249443105267 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0127388535032 0.0148568991511 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2491.0 2732.02544248 91% => OK
No of words: 425.0 452.878318584 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86117647059 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216470588235 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150588235294 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112941176471 0.132149295362 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64017405319 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 219.290929204 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510588235294 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 57.46301279 55.4138127331 104% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3461538462 23.380412469 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.566107491 59.4972553346 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8076923077 141.124799967 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3461538462 23.380412469 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.346153846154 0.674092028746 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.21349557522 480% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.9932126697 51.4728631049 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.77981651376 1.64882698954 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168688400502 0.391690518653 43% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0836243655057 0.123202303941 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0802314669602 0.077325440228 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.461666466268 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131995646587 0.149214159877 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653918829468 0.161403998019 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467598007339 0.0892212321368 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383709510058 0.385218514788 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0939775930555 0.0692045440612 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112973784706 0.275328986314 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400812219915 0.0653680567796 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.5995575221 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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