"A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college."
The business manager of the television station is of the view that they should devote more time to weather and local news. This suggestion comes from the fact that since they have devoted their late night news program to covering more national news instead of weather and local news, there have been many complaints from viewers. The business manager failed to give proper arguments for the complaints.
Firstly, The business manager mentioned that the complaints are regarding the weather and local news but he did not clearly mention what the people are willing to get whether they want more news about whether or it is due to false news about the weather or fake national news. Also, he failed to check whether the complaints are from valid users or from anyone who wants to decrease their popularity by making the news channel to turn their direction in a negative way.
Secondly, The business manager told that the advertising contracts are being canceled but he failed to take into consideration why they canceled the contract. He should make sure that the companies canceled due to their financial crisis or because they are unable to make money due to the advertisement. He should also look into the issue whether they canceled only at this time of the program or entirely with the television channel because there is a chance that the advertising company might think that the customers can be attracted at a particular time in the evening than night time as many of the people who watch television is during evening than night.
Finally,The argument fails to establish the exact reason behind the complaints of the viewers and cancellation of advertising contracts. The manager should think logically and come to a better conclusion after going through the above given discussion.
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- Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with 63
- "A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college." 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...he news channel to turn their direction in a negative way. Secondly, The business manager tol...
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Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e there is a chance that the advertising company might think that the customers ...
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Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dvertising company might think that the customers can be attracted at a particul...
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Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...uring evening than night. Finally,The argument fails to establish the exact r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, look, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03010033445 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54382071185 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498327759197 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7049564773 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.4 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737983225924 0.243740707755 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031726115213 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241994574837 0.0758088955206 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452111508585 0.150359130593 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176170220351 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.