The recommendation suggests that all of the studetns should be asked to study the same national curriculem until they enter college. And I don't think it's a porper recommendation.
First of all, there are many students who have already determine they future career. And under this circumstance, it would be the best if they are allowed to disgn they own class table rather than be forced to learn a lot of ineffective extra courese. For instance, there is an Amercian teen named Jack, who had discovered a new treatment for a specific kind of cancer before he entered University. He have decided to devote himself to medical career at a very young age. And therefore self-learn a lot of medical knowledeges in high school. Clearly, a special curriculum suits him better.
Besides, for ordinary students, an uniform curriculum can also do more harm than good to them, given that interest is always the best teacher. On the one hand, only when students want to learn the knowledge heartly, will they be actively and involved in those classes. On the one hand, they will commmunicate more with their peers and teachers, searching for extra materials, such as papers, lectures, books, etc, to learn. If the students are asked to study the same national curriculum, they will have to face a lot of classes which they're uninterested in. SO their studies are likely to be rather inefficient.
For reasons mentioned about, I think the proposel which suggest that students should study the same national curriculum until they enter college needs to be further discussed. It can be necassary to take students' own interest into account.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
The recommendation suggests that all of the studetns should be asked to study the s...
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...riculem until they enter college. And I dont think its a porper recommendation. Fi...
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Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...il they enter college. And I dont think its a porper recommendation. First of all...
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Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
...here are many students who have already determine they future career. And under this circ...
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Line 2, column 403, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...cancer before he entered University. He have decided to devote himself to medical ca...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tter. Besides, for ordinary students, an uniform curriculum can also do more har...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...ill have to face a lot of classes which theyre uninterested in. SO their studies are l...
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Line 4, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake students own interest into account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 273.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9706959707 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71548420595 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8937511118 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275372956369 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890490101059 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106460110804 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201104368008 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853797659373 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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