I absolutely disagree with the statement that parents are the best teachers. It’s unquestionable that parents play a crucial role in children's’ growth, but not necessarily serve as teachers.
It’s true that under some circumstances especially during the early part of a kid’s life, s/he learn most of the basic skills and common senses from his or her parents. Besides, as parents are the ones who the child spend majority time with before and while they learn how to interact with others, they can learn social interacting skills through monic their parents’ way of communicating, working, and stuff. In this way, it may be true that parents are the POTENTIAL best teachers of children, as long as they have a good understanding of what and how to teach their children, which, in most consequences, is not true.
As parents and teens live in very different ages, it’s very likely that the former fails to catch up with the world, namely, their concepts and knowledge are outmoded. The consequence of this can be devastating especially when some of the bumptious parents try to give their children instructions upon topics which they’re not familiar with, as the children would be misled and facing otherwise much lighter pressure.
Moreover, parents may also be not capable of teaching their children in the right ways. Some parents who are not so good at control themselves when their children make mistakes may ill-treat their children, like beating them, shouting at them, etc., which will do harm to the mental health of kids. Other parents may praise their kids too much so that their children’s mistakes fail to be corrected, which is not good for their development either.
In short, though parents who are also best teachers can bring consequential advantages to kid’s personal development, not every parent can be called a qualified teacher, not to mention ‘the best’.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...e early part of a kid's life, s/he learn most of the basic skills and common sen...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...this can be devastating especially when some of the bumptious parents try to give their chi...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'also the best'.
Suggestion: also the best
...er. In short, though parents who are also best teachers can bring consequential advant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21153846154 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8874274043 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9167871647 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.818181818 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203173734718 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114818560854 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122870435381 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15241615523 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855090762183 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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