Few of us would deny that in today’s society almost everyone plans to attend university or collage after graduating from high school. The reasons are somewhat complex. They can be the attractive collage life, the will to start an academic life and the desire for a better job, among which I think the last one makes sense for the major people.
To begin with, with the rapid growth of science and technology, It’s not uncommon that enterprises require employees to be expert in professional skills and have a high level of learning abilities, which can be obtained in universities and collages. For instance, obviously, one must master basic programming skills to get employed by an Internet company. Apart form that, as nowadays knowledge in nearly every field is constantly updating at a considerably high speed, it’s also curial to form a good learning habit in collage.
Another vital perspective that we shouldn’t ignore is that universities provide students with plenty access to volunteer works, internships and all kinds of competitions, where they can get in touch with individuals from different social class, learning the way they interact and the significants of networking and collaboration, which makes them more adept in socialization and communication. This can positively help them start they ideal life easier. Provided that teens were thrown into the fierce society directly from high school, as their former partners were mainly peers, teachers and relatives, they would tend to have no concept of how to be kind to coworkers and comply with the manager.
Thus, we can draw a conclusion that universities as well as collages help teens get better prepared for their future career. And this partly explains why so many people chase a bachelor or higher degree.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, well, apart from, for example, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 216.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19444444444 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73782366054 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694444444444 0.524837075471 132% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5935342169 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967256977714 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383539272 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357786007761 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478888143392 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494020686979 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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