Few of us would deny that in today’s society almost everyone plans to attend university or collage after graduating from high school. The reasons are somewhat complex. They can be the attractive collage life, the will to start an academic life and the desire for a better job, among which I think the last one makes sense for the major people.
To begin with, with the rapid growth of science and technology, It’s not uncommon that enterprises require employees to be expert in professional skills and have a high level of learning abilities, which can be obtained in universities and collages. For instance, obviously, one must master basic programming skills to get employed by an Internet company. Apart form that, as nowadays knowledge in nearly every field is constantly updating at a considerably high speed, it’s also curial to form a good learning habit in collage.
Another vital perspective that we shouldn’t ignore is that universities provide students with plenty access to volunteer works, internships and all kinds of competitions, where they can get in touch with individuals from different social class, learning the way they interact and the significants of networking and collaboration, which makes them more adept in socialization and communication. This can positively help them start they ideal life easier. Provided that teens were thrown into the fierce society directly from high school, as their former partners were mainly peers, teachers and relatives, they would tend to have no concept of how to be kind to coworkers and comply with the manager.
Thus, we can draw a conclusion that universities as well as collages help teens get better prepared for their future career. And this partly explains why so many people chase a bachelor or higher degree.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23793103448 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85862068966 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.47465862 48.9658058833 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.090909091 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128927433601 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531396409858 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388390252499 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895368072169 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560411625981 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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