A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Education plays an important role in once life.A life without education is like a life wasted.Everyone should have an equal opportunity of education till the basic level.It is the base of once life so,I strongly agree that a country should keep common curriculum until they enter the college for higher education.
Same curriculum will enable an individual to meet the bare minimum requirements for survival.Some subjects like Maths,Science and regional language are the bare minimum requirements for one's survival throughout the life.These subjects enable an individual to perform the basic jobs or bussinessess.For example,Maths will enable them for basic calculations ,Science being a major part of life can make them aware of the basic awareness.Therefore,some basic level of education must be same for all the individuals.
Some people don't like to pursue the further graduate studies,in that case the minimum level of education helps them find survival.Having different curriculum may take people on different grounds which may make society uneven,but the curriculam will make a even base for the society.For instance,some children from bussiness family may like to to bussiness right after the basic level so specification in any subject will not create any difference in their lifes,whereas basic level of education will make them continue the bussiness.
Some people decide their career in some specific area,but again having basic education will lead them to well understanding of higher subjects.Having same curriculum will enable people to start the higher education from the same grounds with better understanding.For example a person wants to pursue the career in the field of Mechanical Engineering then he must have the basic knowledge of Scientific subject like Physics,Mathematical subject for calculations,etc. which will enable a better understanding sense.
Therefore,it is must for a nation to have the same curriculum till school level.This makes a society well-formed and on the same grounds.This enables the basic minimum knowledge for survival.This also enables a person to choose the particular career path while taking the same basic level of education.This basically makes society even,fair and better place of survival.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.6327345309 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 340.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62941176471 5.12650576532 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43904408542 2.78398813304 124% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488235294118 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 22.8473053892 245% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.959254228 57.8364921388 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 319.0 119.503703932 267% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.6666666667 23.324526521 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 5.70786347227 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.25449101796 666% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12813376715 0.218282227539 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646588738081 0.0743258471296 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523908444876 0.0701772020484 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076807318037 0.128457276422 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484261552114 0.0628817314937 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.4 14.3799401198 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 48.3550499002 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.1628742515 254% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 12.197005988 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 12.5979740519 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.32208582834 117% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 12.3882235529 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 11.1389221557 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 11.9071856287 286% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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