A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
As we all know education is one of the important factor for human beings, as well aas the society, as it plays an important role in developing the society.And also nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum is accepted by all the people because there should not be any discrimination regarding education, as it is one of the most important factors for an induvidual.And I also agree with most of the people for the following below reasons.
As there is right to equality in every aspect of life, then why is it for education there isn't any right to equality?As most of the students going for universities are based on several entrance examinations, these different curriculums play an important factor for students.And because of these biased and prejudiced curriculums students tend to not show interest in education,especially in rural regions thinking that, they are not capable of performing as students in good curriculums.
Therefore, students stduying in private schools are given importance to these different entrance examinations and in contrary, students stduying in public schools are not given importance to these examinations.And because of these curriculums the students who are shrewd in these public schools are not getting the oppurtunity to go to the higher universities as compared to students in private schools.
Therefore, in order to to abolish these kinds of unjust treatment,the government should take necessary actions.The education board should look into these problems faced by many students.They need to enforce laws such as, schools in rural or urban areas can follow their own curriculum until the lower grades for students.And once they enter into the highschool they need to follow the same curriculum for all the students whether in rural or urban areas.
As most of the students are judged by the entrance exams conducted by the universities, proper care must be taken by the educational board such that equal education has been provided irrespective of whether private or public schools in rural or urban areas.And because of such necessary actions students from all over the nation get benefited in equal and unprejudiced ways leading their aspirations and dreams coming alive.And therefore because of these actions many students get involved in education,especially in rural areas, where their presence is strongly felt on the nation economy and thus making the entire nation proud.
Recapitulating the above statement,the nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum in order to get the right to equality in education irrespective of whether private or public schools..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36941176471 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12976203259 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449411764706 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 23.0359550562 304% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.87254271 60.3974514979 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 380.333333333 118.986275619 320% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.8333333333 23.4991977007 301% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 5.21951772744 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219757507299 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136186940267 0.0831039109588 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652796278241 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136186940267 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652796278241 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.3 14.1392134831 278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.03 48.8420337079 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 12.1743820225 261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.05 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 11.2143820225 268% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.