A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
The statement potrays positively about the basic curriculum in any nation that every student should follow.As it is said by cavin coolidge that "world is full of educated derelicts."As education is important for every individual,there is a requirement for the knowledge to choose in which category they are interested.
The statement attempts to say that until they enter college ,it is the rquirement for every individual to learn the same national curriculum.The assumption is that students need to be teached the same curriculum until the undergraduation for the better future.one could argue that it is true as adoloscent to be teached first to select what the are good at.
However,all the children grow up by gaining different knowledge and liking different streams,it is necessary to teach the same curriculum to know their choice of interest.For instance, if a student is grown with different curriculum he may choose some stream but he doesn't know the basic knowledge about different things such as politics in day to day life,tax for the goods and many more.If he is taught in the national curriculum, then he would get the basic knowledge about different streams such as biology,social,literature,mathematics.If he is taught all the different streams in the national curriculum,he will be able to choose the desired stream in which he can do his best and in which he is good at.
In conclusion,one can say that training the students in same national curriculum would help them to choose the degree after entering the college and can do their best in which they are interested.Through this every nation may get the intelligent adoloscent who are helpful to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 272.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24264705882 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.7717649811 2.79657885939 135% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 23.0359550562 295% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.050543957 60.3974514979 282% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 356.5 118.986275619 300% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.0 23.4991977007 289% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 5.21951772744 421% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32799413676 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211949251367 0.0831039109588 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727814686597 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211949251367 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727814686597 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.3 14.1392134831 264% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 48.8420337079 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 12.1743820225 245% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.3 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 11.8971910112 273% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 11.2143820225 260% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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