National curriculum
Curriculum which is the core of education at every level of education, from kindergarden to the post graduation is made by different sources depending on the country. Even though it seems like having a single curriculum for the nation promotes uniformity and reduces the hassle, in reality it doesn't seem to be that lucid. Nation from a perspective of scale is very huge and designing a one curriculum for all the states is cumbersome and complex
One of the example of nations which follow a national curriculum is china, It has a single national curriculum and only one main examination as an entrance to the colleges. The curriculum brings a lot of pressure on the students as there is only one entrance into the colleges and so much competition to tackle.The prospects of career for a student who didnot perform well are very sparse. This makes the student to have a pedestran approach to the education leaving no room for the creativity.
Designing a curriculum for the complete nation which has so many states each possesing different cultures, and varying access to the technology is sure to cuse issues. Instead of having a complete curriculum for nation, it is better to handover the control of the curriculum to the states and making them comply with few rules and restrictions would be a better way. In this way states can modify the curriculum according to their locale and comply with the nation without going astray with the curriculum.
Language can also act as a hindrance to designing as curriculum and providing relevnat study material.If the states are given the power to create curicculum each of would come up with curriculum for their state students it would improve diversity and improve the creativity of the students. Many curriculums
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96621621622 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81512589453 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7730771978 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.333333333 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8888888889 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504876485965 0.243740707755 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231244003792 0.0831039109588 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150234980498 0.0758088955206 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324064709095 0.150359130593 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852379205224 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.1392134831 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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