People most respect the powerful not when they exercise their power but when they refrain from exercising it
power, by definition is the authority and dominance a certain group or person have over another. While most powerful person or groups are not respected when they refrain from using their power, those who exercise their dominance are the ones respected. After weighing evidence, it is certain that powerful ones are most respected by people when they exercise their power. people are moved by actions, not just by claiming a position.
those who argue that powerful most respected are ones who do not exercise their power have probably not experienced war or chaos before. A powerful group that cannot assist the community during tumult will be disgusted by the people in the community, thereby loosing the much respect they deserve.
Now consider the USA army . The USA army is surely of the most powerful battalions in land. The USA army render assistance to other countries attacked by terrorism. And yet there are other nations army, are they not as strong as the USA army? But the USA army with its powerful and abundant resources help to fight terrorism in some other parts of the countries.With these generous act from the USA army, people all around the world give them the highly much respect they deserve.
Like the USA army, the president of the United States of America is regarded as the most powerful and respected president in the world, this can be seen from the fact that he utilises and exercise the power at his disposal to lead the entire country. Making the country more prosperous by promoting the economy and fighting crimes. Compared to other countries president, the usa president has the resources to fight terrorism and he utilises the when deem fit thereby attracting a lot of respect from the people.
As the bulk of evidence shows, it is clear that the powerful are respected most when they exercise their power than when they refrain from exercising it. The USA army and the USA president are great examples as it can be seen that they attract respect from people when they both exercise their power.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90778097983 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40587611068 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455331412104 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3651977916 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4375 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 5.21951772744 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.618201729176 0.243740707755 254% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231344659366 0.0831039109588 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.236842988245 0.0758088955206 312% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.408888182341 0.150359130593 272% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.238609973433 0.0667264976115 358% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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