As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology is the essence of today's modern world. Technology enables people to communicate effectively over vast regions within few seconds of time. Furthermore it help to calculate a wide range of calculations within seconds of interval. The modern world has led to more enhanced means of technology which has made life at ease. This revolutionary phenomenon comes with certain boons and curses.
As more and more people rely on the technology, people get addicted to lethargy. Moreover overuse of technology can be considered as an trite. Traditionally people used to perform a wide range of calculations, travel long distance on foot, use their own knowledge to explore vast regions over the earth. With the development in technology which has provided modern equipment including calculator, motor vehicles, mobile GPS, etc people are more attracted towards a stressless life. Furthermore, the enhancement in technology has definitely reduced the human capacity to think at the same time it has helped the humans to suistainably develop.
Technology has provide humans with lots of luxury, comfort, peace, pace to enhance at an rapid pace. Consider the example of Internet which provide Wikipedia, Encyclopedia using which information about an article can be obtained within seconds of interval. Moreover modern factory equipments, mobile phones, smartwatches, advanced live streaming, well developed metros and highly advanced graphic games has made peoples life full of happiness. Nevertheless the avaliablity plethora of such technology has revolutionized the lifestyle of human beings.
The essence of technology is that technology is advantageous to humans despite its shortcomings. Despite the fact that overrelying on technology has deterioated the humans quality to think, technology has motivated humans to drive a better comfortable life.
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- Test 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ast regions within few seconds of time. Furthermore it help to calculate a wide range of ca...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...hin few seconds of time. Furthermore it help to calculate a wide range of calculatio...
^^^^
Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ology, people get addicted to lethargy. Moreover overuse of technology can be considered...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ruse of technology can be considered as an trite. Traditionally people used to per...
^^
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...o suistainably develop. Technology has provide humans with lots of luxury, comfort, pe...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ury, comfort, peace, pace to enhance at an rapid pace. Consider the example of Int...
^^
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...be obtained within seconds of interval. Moreover modern factory equipments, mobile phone...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...as made peoples life full of happiness. Nevertheless the avaliablity plethora of such techno...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 278.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6726618705 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0916193728 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0928775292 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5625 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247578104716 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875373681123 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803959008663 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159425766165 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747058675044 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 48.8420337079 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.