As people rely more and more on technology to solve the problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Nowadays, everything we do is often associated with some technology which makes the task at hand easier. People are relying more and more on these technologies and stopped thinking about solutions for themselves. However, if we look at the fact that, these are the very people who developed these technologies with quality and precision, with a lot of heuristic thinking. I disagree with the statement that these technologies will lead to the deterioration of human thinking for the below reasons.
Firstly, No matter how vast and fast these technologies are, they were all made by humans with proper thinking, logic, and precision. The irony is we think that these technologies will make humans less intelligent. However, these technologies have an impact on common people who don’t partake in developing these technologies. But in a general way, we can say that these technologies can’t impact overall humans ability to think as these are developed by these very humans.
Secondly, These technologies act like puppets to the humans and act like we say them to and do like we configured it to be. So, some level of configuration and thinking is still left to common people who use these technologies which helps them in thinking and understanding of these technologies which in turn can trigger the thinking process in humans.
Lastly, by developing more and more of these advanced technologies human brain can reach far more effective levels and can function way faster. The process of developing these technologies will make human thinking more regress and helps to get better day by day. A simple example here can be any software technology that internally uses programming languages like Java and Python that need more and more comprehensive thinking to make new technologies out of them.
However, these technologies lead to automation of every quotidian thing we do in life which can help people who are in need like patients and old people. These technologies play a vital role in the medical industry as there will be a need for precision and swiftness which if done by humans can take a lot of time and can be clumsy. So in these cases, technologies play a vital role and as well needed beyond human thinking and precision.
So I would like to conclude that these technologies don’t have much impact on humans as the humans themselves have developed these technologies with lots of thinking and understanding. However, there can be an impact on some people which can be needed, given in some scenarios like old people or patients.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07451923077 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9656321217 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449519230769 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7928805255 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.733333333 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7333333333 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296724782505 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150304742789 0.0831039109588 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09821565893 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191253430731 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077075438766 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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