Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing
fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree
with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address
the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge
your position.
With the continuous development of education, many educational institutions have more and more comprehensive means to train a student. Many students come up with various fields in which they want to pursue their career.From the perspective of the institutions,they might think the field of study some students want to select are not likely to succeed. In other words,maybe the student with potential talent is more successful in other fields. So, should educational institutions discourage students from this kind of pursuit? In my opinion, every students has the right to go after the yearning field of study, whatever the result would be perfect or not. Therefore,educational institutions should not interfere too much in it.
Admittedly, the claim may be meaningful for the future career development of students. Through the way to dissuade, students can avoid spending many time and efforts in their weakness. Instead,it can help them look for what they are really good at gradually. Furthermore, because educational institutions should cultivate useful talents to society, such dissuasion really helps students to develop talents in their field of expertise.
However,there are notable flaws in such inferences.First of all, although pedagogy , psychology and other disciplines are evolving, educational institutions still cannot judge the success of students accurately.For example,Albert Einstein could not speak until the age of three. His teacher once said that he could not succeed, but in fact he grew up to be a highly accomplished physicist. That is to say, it is difficult to predict whether everyone's development will succeed. If educational institutions dissuade them only according to their own judgment, students may also miss one of the opportunities to succeed.
Most importantly,discouraging students may not make students obey but resist. It’s possible for them to show the negative side in areas that appear to be seemingly successful. In the stage of fundamental education, students have the right to fully study well, while in the higher education stage, students have the right to choose their major freely. Both rights are the part of the right of education, because of which educational institutions have no right to deprive them.
To summarize,educational institutions can train different talents specifically, but they have no obligation or right to discourage students from engaging in their chosen majors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... which they want to pursue their career.From the perspective of the institutions,the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58870967742 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4504906759 2.79657885939 123% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55376344086 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.910822024 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.421052632 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.89473684211 5.21951772744 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267020847811 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804054286415 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580117549863 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147550858231 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622078500896 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.