People's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making
Behaviour is a habit which can warries from person to person. Every person's who is either bureaucrats or government officials should always take care of consequence before doing or stating something in public or private. As behaviour affect's every factor which constitutes to be a human kind. If behaviour is forced to do something which might result in either good or bad effect, and it might either deteriorate or flourish the behaviour. In case of politics or pragmatic, one should always make sure that such behaviour should affect as much as less possible or minimized the outcome.
First is the example of Russia-Ukraine War, which started in 2021, due to aspiration of Ukraine on becoming a member of North Atlantic Treaty Organization also known as NATO. The war forced other countries living in peace to choose either Russia or Ukraine as their partner for future. The government's took their decision on war like doctrinaire which consulting with the general citizen's of respective country. Without taking the consequences into consideration like trade impact, business dealing, energy supplies and many more.
Second is the example of Basr-Al-Asad, the President of Syria, who used chemical weapon's to suppress the protest held against his government. Without taking any consequences into consideration, his behaviour portrayed as monarch who wants to rule country by force. His decision of using chemical weapon's not only killed innocent citizen's but also was deplored in international forum of world peace.
Third is the example of United States of America, the one of the most important country in the world. In Russia-Ukraine war, it choose the Ukraine as country to support overtly and sanctioned Russia from SWIFT, trade, use of oil products and many more for starting war against tyro and immature country. But, the President of USA, didn't took the consequence's into consideration like economic downfall, recession, lowering the life style of ordinary citizens and many more.
I do not completely agree with the statement. Sometimes situation forces person's to take harsh approach to suppress the dangerous or detrimental outcome. But, every one should always take care of the consequence's will be faced by other's living along with us. We are not jus the person in the world came to rule.
- All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children s schools 58
- Government officials should rely on their own judgement rather than unquestionably carry out the will of the people they serve 50
- Claim No act is done purely for the benefit of others Reason All Actions even those that seem to be done for other people are based on self interest 58
- Some people argue that successful leaders in government industry or other fields must be highly competitive Others people claim that in order to be successful a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others 83
- Government should offer college and university education free of charge to all students 50
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...stating something in public or private. As behaviour affects every factor which co...
^^
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'chooses'?
Suggestion: chooses
...in the world. In Russia-Ukraine war, it choose the Ukraine as country to support overt...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 331, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ure country. But, the President of USA, didnt took the consequences into consideratio...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22641509434 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83719579242 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5525606469 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1905241503 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.052631579 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05263157895 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101265791371 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318387417647 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414647886604 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495641010886 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460430063006 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...stating something in public or private. As behaviour affects every factor which co...
^^
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'chooses'?
Suggestion: chooses
...in the world. In Russia-Ukraine war, it choose the Ukraine as country to support overt...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 331, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ure country. But, the President of USA, didnt took the consequences into consideratio...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22641509434 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83719579242 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5525606469 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1905241503 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.052631579 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05263157895 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101265791371 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318387417647 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414647886604 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495641010886 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460430063006 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.