People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences. The prompt suggests that the consequences of a risky action have to be carefully considered before performing the action. While I do concede that sometimes taking quick action is more important that evaluating the consequences, I mostly agree with the prompt for two reasons.
In some cases, the situation at hand demands a quick action and does not provide enough time to evaluate the consequences. When in one such situation, it is imperative to take action as quickly as possible instead of wasting the precious time on considering the consequences.
However, in most cases it is important to evaluate the actions for any detrimental consequences. The actions taken without deligently considering the consequences are often irrevokable. For example, in a war situation, every descision an authority takes might have some indelible effects on the country. Consider a situation where the opponent army tries to capture. If the army major tries to send the army to fight with the confronting army without deligently considering the number of soldiers present, and without evaluating the consequences of fighting with limited soldiers and supplies, it could be extremely harmful. It could result in the death of a large numer of soldiers, it could even have an impact on the country's army as a whole. Therefore, it is really important in situations like these to evaluate the consequences carefully.
Furthermore, lack of proper consideration of consequences for a risky action often leads to surprising and disheartening outcomes.
When people are not clearly aware of the possible outcomes, they might be unable to digest the results. For instance, many young people in their 20s who have just started earning, often tries to get in the stock market. Many of them start investing without reading the proper guidelines and the posible consequences. They generally will be in a fallacious belief that just putting money in the stock market is enough to multiply their money. It is imperative for the stock markets which go up at one time to fall down sometime. The young people cannot often digest the fact that their money instead of multiplying, actually became a fraction. Hence, it is crucial to consider the possible negative outcomes before taking any risk.
In conclusion, weather to spend time on evaluating the consequences of a risky action is contentious. In some time critical situations, one can get away with not deligently consdering the deleterious consequences, However in most of the situations it is adviced to consider both sides of the coin before performing any critical action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in most cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2280.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00264229774 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472222222222 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3975280378 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.636363636 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226343239221 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743920670821 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796046958182 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125332554239 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889551961315 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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