People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole
It is true that people's attitude are determined by their immediate action or situation rather than by society as a whole. Because attitude is important factor to make your reputation towards others. It is determined by how you act in the quick situation in which you have to make a immediate decision and make appropriate solution. How one behave in the surroundings rather than in the society as a whole, is much important to determine the person's attitude.
For example, you are applicable for the job placement, then director puts certain condition to you, whether you decide to agree the terms and condition or leave the company by refusing it. Then obviously, you have to take immediate decision to what to do. In such conditions, you have no more time to think very deeply. So you have to quickly put your agreement or disagreement to impress the director. It is possible that director wants to check your attitude towards the immediate or hasty decision. If you success to make your reputation very well by taking immediate decision, whether it is in favor or not, then you can be selected for the job easily. So this defines your attitude. If you are confidence in your goal and decisions then there no such things to stop you to achieve your success or goal. People will not call you hero if you take time to take your decision and doesn't make well decisions. So it is up to you to how to achieve success by your confidence and attitude towards others. Because attitude and imagination is more important factor to take your place in this competitive world.
However, it is not true in every situation because we have to keep in mind that society is our ideal. people's attitude is not determined by only their immediate situation or surroundings but also determined by your attribution towards the society. If you do well for the society then it is obviously fact that your reputation will also increase as your contribution to the society will increase. Moreover, common man is a representative of society's domestic success.
So, from the bulk of evidence, we can conclude that person's attitude is dependent on the immediate action or solution taken by the person rather than society as a whole.
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- People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210653753027 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.162227602906 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0653753026634 0.0880659088768 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0677966101695 0.0497285424764 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.101694915254 0.0444667217837 229% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128329297821 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0193704600484 0.0406280797675 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.72900254579 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0532687651332 0.030933414821 172% => OK
Particles: 0.00242130750605 0.0016655270985 145% => OK
Determiners: 0.0653753026634 0.0997080785238 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121065375303 0.0249443105267 49% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0121065375303 0.0148568991511 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2214.0 2732.02544248 81% => OK
No of words: 381.0 452.878318584 84% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81102362205 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341207349081 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.288713910761 0.280924506359 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202099737533 0.200843997647 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139107611549 0.132149295362 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72900254579 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422572178478 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.9040016302 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.05 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7602889566 59.4972553346 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.7 141.124799967 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 47.9213910761 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.0802919708 1.64882698954 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235252851155 0.391690518653 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136681474822 0.123202303941 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0602798901687 0.077325440228 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537093640648 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161978673956 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1043175298 0.161403998019 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15250170489 0.0892212321368 171% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365933715136 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0758332473381 0.0692045440612 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214533280442 0.275328986314 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924365901507 0.0653680567796 141% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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