"A person's own habits and attitudes often limit that person's freedom more than do restrictions
imposed by others."
The term 'freedom' can have many interpretations such as freedom to move from one place to another or freedom of thought and expression. The prompt suggests that a person's own habits and attitudes often limit that person's freedom. While restrictions imposed by other people can play a significant role in curbing a person's freedom, it is often his own attitude and perspectives which could be attributed to the limitations on freedom. Hence, I agree with the author's claim that an individual's obstinate behavior could restrict his freedom. My viewpoints are aptly illustrated through the below-mentioned examples.
Firstly, sometimes, it is the person's narrow outlook and perspective that can hamper his freedom of thought and expression. For instance, a few religious communities in India, have restricted themselves from traveling to any place abroad, due to their religious beliefs and principles. They believe that traveling to different places outside their own country could bring undesirable consequences. Therefore, these people have restricted their freedom due to their narrow-mindedness and strong devotion to their religious beliefs. Further, if we consider religious people like saints who have abstained themselves from worldly pleasures. Therefore, they have adopted self-restriction to enlighten themselves and live a moralistic life. From the above-stated examples, it is clear that a person's own attitude could limit his freedom.
In addition to this, bad habits could also cause a person to have restrictions on his freedom. For instance, consider a student who secludes himself in his own room by playing video games or wasting his time on social media. These habits do not allow him to go out and play or perform any other activities of his choice. Since he is addicted to his phone, he limits himself to his own room, thus restricting his freedom to move from one place to another. Therefore, bad habits could also be one of the possible and significant factors that can limit a person's freedom.
However, in contrast to the above statement, sometimes restrictions imposed by other people can limit a person's freedom to some extent. However, these restrictions may be temporary as a headstrong and determined individual can overcome these restrictions and find a way out to gain his freedom.
For instance, India was Britain's colony for a very long period of time. During Britain's reign, there were several restrictions imposed on people that would hamper their freedom. For instance, the farmers were forced to grow only certain types of crops that would provide profits to the British people. Several goods and products made in Indian industries were exported to England at very cheap prices and thus the Indian government had no freedom to oppose this policy. But eventually, under the influence of great leaders such as Mahatma Gandhi, people protested against these oppressions and India was successful in achieving freedom after some time.
To sum up, although restrictions imposed by some external factors could limit a person's freedom, he can eventually overcome these restrictions and regain his freedom. However, a person's attitude and habits could lead to permanent restrictions on his freedom. His perspectives and outlooks can hamper his freedom of thought, expression, or movement. Therefore, I believe that a person's attitude and habits could limit his freedom more than restrictions imposed by others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun interpretation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many interpretations'.
Suggestion: many interpretations
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Suggestion:
...ble to move from one place to another or freedom of thought and expression. The p...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...nd expression. The prompt suggests that a persons own habits and attitudes often limit th...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...n habits and attitudes often limit that persons freedom. While restrictions imposed by ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...an play a significant role in curbing a persons freedom, it is often the his own attitu...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
... curbing a persons freedom, it is often the his own attitude and perspectives which cou...
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Suggestion:
...erspectives which could be attributed to strictures applied on that person. Hence...
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Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...ce, I agree with the authors claim that an individuals obstinate behavior cold possibly restri...
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Suggestion: a person; persons
... above stated examples it is clear that a persons own attitude could limit his freedom. ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...and significant factor that can limit a persons freedom. However, in contrast to the...
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ons imposed by other people can limit a persons freedom to some extent. However, these ...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...dia was Britains colony for a very long period of time. During Britains reign, there were seve...
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... by some external factors could limit a persons freedom, he can eventually overcome the...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ons and regain his freedom . However, a persons attitude and habits could lead to a pe...
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Suggestion:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'restriction'?
Suggestion: restriction
...e and habits could lead to a permanent restrictions on his freedom. His perspectives and ou...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...r movement. Therefore, I believe that a persons attitude and habits could limit his fre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2949.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 553.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33273056058 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86913967791 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475587703436 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 902.7 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3835739579 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.321428571 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 10.2758426966 224% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439039234527 0.243740707755 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145021792078 0.0831039109588 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154557046145 0.0758088955206 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22702669642 0.150359130593 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142927737475 0.0667264976115 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.