Crime, punishment and opportunity to penace has always been a topic of discussion among lawyers, politicians, psychologists and humanitarians, owing to widespread effects it can bring. The prose mentions acerbic comment towards criminals mentioning that they should not be allowed any type of civil right, even the benefits from their labor. This was true, throughout most of the history. However,with advancement of ideas, these tight rules should be ammended and reconsidered for betterment of society.
First and foremost, the claim is not correct from human right perspective. Yes, there was a time, criminals were given the most difficult punishments, even capital punishment and there are still nations where criminals are given the worst possible treatment. However, a human being is born with several rights, called as human right and civil rights. Right to food, shelter, Clothing, care, respect and right to labor are the things a human being owns since he was born. It is not natural to make any human being devoid of such rights and as we know, unnatural things are not good for societies on long run. So, no human being should be deprived of his Natural rights, how criminal or wrong that person is.
Secondly, Punishment is given to any criminal, expecting him/her to be better person, more suited to return to society and perform normal functions. For this, the criminal must be motivated such that he/she will realize social norms, values and importance of labor. This is possible only if he/she is given civil rights and right to benefit from his own labor. If he/she does not realize this, the person will never be suitable enough to go back to society and perform his daily activities again. Thus, human rights and right to benefit from labor are necessary to make him suitable for living in society once again.
Further, we have seen several examples of ferocious criminals being good person once again, and even those who have eventually changed themselves to saints. For instance, Ratnakar was a notorious burglar from indian subcontinent, responsible for terror and crimes in the region. However, a saint 'Narad Muni' motivated him to become saint, and the criminal changed himself, into a saint, eventually becoming author of great hindu scripture, 'Ramayana'. There are other less famous cases throughout the history. Thus, motivation in right track is essential to change infamous criminals to good people and even saints.
There are other schools of thought, who claim that abstaining from civil rights and right to benefit from labor will render criminals to the condition of penace and they will realize that they have done really bad thing. However, this statement loses ground since we have known that this type of punishment will render criminals with thoughts of revenge to government and governance system, eventually making them more criminal with time. Thus, the notion mentioning deprivation of criminals from civil rights and rights to own labor needs reconsideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 397, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
... throughout most of the history. However,with advancement of ideas, these tight rules...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2522.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 485.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59446994815 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498969072165 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 764.1 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4988901966 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.652173913 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0869565217 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47826086957 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244766889737 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823061240068 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714460537879 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145777478935 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467596959129 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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