The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that they have more leisure time.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
For the longest time, the goal of advancing technology has been to increase work efficiency and to increase the production rates for the necessities of human beings. In the prompt, it is stated that the primary goal in the advancement of technology is to increase people’s efficiency. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this statement and argue that it is true for the following reasons.
Firstly, technological advancements are being made to contribute to the people. technological advancements in the field of medicine are being made to help the masses. For instance, people who are physically challenged such as losing their arms, or legs, could be solved by them receiving a prosthetic required and be back to normal. However, this does not stand to increase people’s leisure time but in turn, increases their quality of livelihood.
Secondly, the advancement of technology in the field of computers is to develop an artificial intelligence such that it can handle the problems which could not be tackled with just human strength and brain alone as the human brain can only remember so much. For instance, even when an artificial intelligence like this is developed there might be a corruption of memory or some sort of malfunction in the artificial intelligence and this needs to be fixed by the humans who have developed it. In this case, it does not increase people’s leisure time, but to solve this new problem people would need to decrease their leisure time and work on solving it.
Lastly, the technology needs advancement to help the rural areas to be urbanized at a fast pace as there are rural areas that to this day don't have minimum amenities to live in, to develop a rural area, advancement is needed in many fields. For instance, a rural area that has been considered to be urbanized is considered, it would need a lot of people and hard work to accomplish the task even if there is technological advancement in the required fields proper planning and execution are required.
Of course, some may argue that technological advancements are being made to bring people a lot of leisure time. But, it is quite the opposite, as you would need further more knowledge and manpower to maintain this new advanced technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technological
...being made to contribute to the people. technological advancements in the field of medicine a...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'artificial intelligence'.
Suggestion: artificial intelligence
...member so much. For instance, even when an artificial intelligence like this is developed there might be a...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... there are rural areas that to this day dont have minimum amenities to live in, to d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, of course, sort of, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97619047619 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9036883262 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468253968254 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5669952 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.357142857 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 5.21951772744 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305385751004 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120416427548 0.0831039109588 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468677188405 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182148401435 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632294052254 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.