The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
The claim implies that, the talent of a musician can only be judged with parity after he or her is long gone.I blatantly disregard this claim. How would a person who was born in 1990's would feel to listen or judge the music of late musician Bob Marley or Micheal Jackson?Do you think a guy who will hum to a Justin bieber and Miley cyrus song, could be in a position to appreciate the actual worth of past musicians?I don't think so.
Firstly, we can judge the value of newtons law, after he is long gone, as the discoveries he made are sill relevant to any generation. But, music is a different thing. If I ask my dad to listen to Justin bieber's best songs like 'Baby' and some other latest songs like 'Whip whip nae nae', he wouldn't listen to the whole song in the first place and say, this is not real music. The real music used to be done by beatles, where the songs used to have proper meaning. So, with the generation gap, the tastes and opinions change. From this we can say music can best be judged in the era of the musician, where people can actually see him perform and connect to him.
In addition, fame helps in getting the actual opinion of people over the particular musician. Let's say you want to take a opinion on who is the best musician?.This could be more accurately done, if the musician is more famous and can be reachable to all his fans through twitter, facebook and other social networks.On whether a bad personal fame will have a detrimental effect or a good fame will have an added edge to the musicians work is also a point to consider. In this line, we can take the example of Justin bieber. His initial album 'My world' released in 2010 is a platinum seller. Then he came into some legal issues regarding his social etiquette and had experienced a bad fame for some time in his career, but this no way effected his 2015 'purpose' album from breaking all his previous selling records. His personal behaviour didn't interfere with his music's judgement by people in any way.This was the case with many present day famous musicians. Taylor swift, who is accused to be mercurial in her decisions, Kanye west , who is again criticized for his bad decorous, have enjoyed success, irrespective of their fame.
Even more, judging a musician, when he is alive actually has positive effects, the musicians get to know where is hitting a right note and where he is not. This allows the musician to improve. Let's take the example of galileo, who got named as father of modern physics after he was long gone. Wouldn't it have been more motivating and satisfying, if his work had been appreciated when he was alive!.In similar way it will help musicians to be motivated to make good music, if they are recognised for their work when they are alive.
All in all, from all the above depictions we can clearly see numerous reasons for how fame won't come in the way of assessing a musician and it would be more beneficial, logical to judge a musician when he is alive.The most important take is, musicians can't be judged after a century or two,as the music can become obselete in the time of judging.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'in addition', 'in the first place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215311004785 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.181818181818 0.157235817809 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0956937799043 0.0880659088768 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0382775119617 0.0497285424764 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0637958532695 0.0444667217837 143% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0925039872408 0.12292977631 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0462519936204 0.0406280797675 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40331001327 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0318979266348 0.030933414821 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0988835725678 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0287081339713 0.0249443105267 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0255183413078 0.0148568991511 172% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3142.0 2732.02544248 115% => OK
No of words: 567.0 452.878318584 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54144620811 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.58838876751 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.273368606702 0.366273622748 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.199294532628 0.280924506359 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141093474427 0.200843997647 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0828924162257 0.132149295362 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40331001327 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 219.290929204 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 62.1580164111 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 28.35 23.380412469 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.0579382456 59.4972553346 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.1 141.124799967 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.35 23.380412469 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.21349557522 518% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.2794532628 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.24719101124 1.64882698954 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291987289238 0.391690518653 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0955570932551 0.123202303941 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0542354231279 0.077325440228 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.505917747114 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188597523094 0.149214159877 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118457908702 0.161403998019 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621543438666 0.0892212321368 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35657665982 0.385218514788 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0168372860094 0.0692045440612 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203236685686 0.275328986314 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369820846316 0.0653680567796 57% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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