The true test of the greatness of a work of art is its ability to be understood by the masses.
It may sound right or one might have come across such statements as one should question or oppose the familiar.But, once we go deep and analyse this in numerous domains and situations we can see in many cases that, it is not completely correct. Lets take examples of as large as Indian government and as small or specific case as to individuals such as virat kohli, Ad Devillers.
Lets start with bigger domain, Indian government is still following the same constitution written by Dr.B.R.Ambedkar in 1950. This only had as positive impact on country such as, providing the opportunities for under developed groups of society by providing them with reservations. Lets analyse the case of reservations in India, the familiar notion of this is to provide anyone with reservation who belongs to particular category such as OBC,SC,ST. But with self-knowledge without rejecting the familiar found out the inticacies with providing the same reservations for everyone in same category and introduced a new criteria, that is annual income. People with less than particular income can only avail certain reservation facilities irrespective of their cast.
In addition to this lets consider individuals who rose the occasion in their particular fields and become idols to youth all over the world. Let's take Virat Kohli, who made his mark at very young age.He used to play traditional cricket shots such as cover drive,square cut picturesquely as they are supposed to be played. But to self-knowledge to came with his own fitness regimes that no one else traditionally did in their cricket carrier. He added weightlifting to his fitness regime, which allowed him to generate power into the shot more than ever. This only made him more perfect batsmen, still he didn't change the traditionally sucessfull shots above mentioned.Same is the case with AB Devillers, the south african international cricket team captain. The traditional rules of, keeping your head still while playing the shot and playing as close to your body are part of his armor, In addition to these he developed unorthodox shots which only he can play, such as putting away a perfect yorker over square leg. One can consider Ratan tata in similar lines, he believed in rules of traditional business such as, business should be based on ethics.Which made him only more succesfull.
On contrary there are people who went out of norms such as Mark Zuckerburg and Jack ma. who opposed the then traditional rules and invented facebook and alibaba which made them billionaires today. But these examples are very less and specific to some damoains.
In conclussion from the above examples in most cases one neddnot reject the familiar to become succesful or to develop his own knowledge.As w can see kohli and ABD it can onl;y im[prove u\you if you folloe familiar.
- The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar. 87
- The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment. 50
- The true test of the greatness of a work of art is its ability to be understood by the masses. 58
- “The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every ef 54
- The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar. 79
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'while', 'as to', 'in addition', 'such as', 'in many cases', 'in most cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238188976378 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.147637795276 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.124015748031 0.0880659088768 141% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0472440944882 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0551181102362 0.0444667217837 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13188976378 0.12292977631 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0314960629921 0.0406280797675 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88437763891 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0314960629921 0.030933414821 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00393700787402 0.0016655270985 236% => OK
Determiners: 0.0629921259843 0.0997080785238 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0196850393701 0.0249443105267 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0157480314961 0.0148568991511 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2824.0 2732.02544248 103% => OK
No of words: 464.0 452.878318584 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08620689655 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331896551724 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265086206897 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193965517241 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88437763891 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 219.290929204 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536637931034 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 63.5865231446 55.4138127331 115% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.7777777778 23.380412469 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4664501854 59.4972553346 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.888888889 141.124799967 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 23.380412469 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.21349557522 345% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.2863984674 51.4728631049 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.6062992126 1.64882698954 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283746021939 0.391690518653 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11977695731 0.123202303941 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.042396662424 0.077325440228 55% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.545977391398 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155027201833 0.149214159877 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112756886007 0.161403998019 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695916748279 0.0892212321368 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.226812076688 0.385218514788 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0828860144255 0.0692045440612 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166870359617 0.275328986314 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864031713189 0.0653680567796 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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