The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
there are many musicians composing vast amount of music with differnet kind of genre like pop,jazz,classsic,rock etc. Different people follow or admire these artist on the basis of their music interest. Due to fame or lavish lifestyle ,musician often come across controversies which hampers their fame or reputation. people generally consider these controversies while assesing any artist for his talent. But an artist should always be judged on the basis of his work or his creation not on the basis of his personal life.
people often tends to focus on personal life of an artist or any popular person while assesing him. we consider how the person behaves in public or how does he/she handle fame without doing any mistakes. As a human being we often make mistakes, which creates some impact on our life. In same way, the musicians also make mistakes some times and we should not consider him if we are assesing him for his talent. people should be very liberal to assess a musican's talent on the basis of his compositions. we should consider how diligently a musician create new compostions.
there are many musician who involve in drugs and alcohol which hampers their fame.there are many rock bands who consumes energy drinks while performing, because it suits them,it makes them more energetic which is required for the live performances. there is very famous musician named as pritam in bollywood industry. people are very big fan of his music. because of the one controversy regarding his love life,people started unfollowing him and he did not composed new music for some time. after some time after resolving all the issues, he made a comeback in music industry and he composed a great music,which ultimately became the most popular party song of the nation. people still enjoy his music because of his talent or creativity.
there are many more examples where musicians have done mistakes,but the person should not be assessed based on his personal.The person should be solely judjed on the basis of his artwork.At the end, people will slowly forget the mistakes and enjoy the music. When a musician dies,people still enjoy his music, they do not remember his mistakes and just feel the music. A person need not to be dead for several generations to get an honest assessment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, still, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98697916667 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70130171931 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513020833333 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2891264174 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232572428503 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811071517323 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495076462892 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155982657343 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358270398654 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.