Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Are scandals useful since they focus out attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could as speaker asserts? In many cases scandals plays pivotal role in exposing out the root problems of the society; however, in some cases these piece of information turn the focus of people out of main activities. I mostly agree with issue for three reasons.
To begin with, in some cases the rapt attention of general public towards such material stemmed other major activities. In another words, the society give more emphasis to the sensational news and material then their routine duty. For instance, the exclusive focus of the media and other social activists towards the venality of the state minister overshadows important news of country's winning gold medal in the regional cup; ultimately the slander made upon the minister was debunked by the supreme court. This illustrates, when media as well as other communication agency highlight sensational news some important achievement is obscured. People are always interested to the news that are piquant to them either that is verified or fabricated. Media's foremost intention is to generate revenue thus they primarily focus on such material other than those that need to forefront.
However, in most of the cases the shocking news have played positive role to the society and helped to eradicate some of the ill costumes of the society. For example, the Chhaupadi tradition is rooted in the far western region of the Nepal. In this tradition those girl and women on their monthly cycle are isolated to shade, usually in the abandoned house far from their home; the tradition has exacerbated the health of those victims and some were the pry of rape. However, when this tradition was brought upon as nation issue then it took different form. All the shades of those far western region were destroyed and strong law was enacted to the one who again pursue for such bad costumes. This illustrates the power of scandals in making the radical changes in the society and in the law and order of the country.
In addition, the scandals plays pivotal role in the strong awareness against some brutal action. For instances, the allegation made to the actors for his salacious behavior and sexual harassment to one of the side actor was so sensational that actor was sentenced for incarceration. This action become the inciting factor for other such voiced to be raised and within the single year many such cases were exposed which were hidden for years in fear of not getting justice. This sent the strong caveat to those ill mannered people who intends to involved in such activities.
In sum, in some cases such sensational activities can outshine other main activities of national concern, however, in most of the cases the society and the country as a whole is benefitted when rooted costumes traditions are exposed out in sensational form.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...th, in some cases the rapt attention of general public towards such material stemmed other maj...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... to the society and helped to eradicate some of the ill costumes of the society. For exampl...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this girl' or 'those girls'?
Suggestion: this girl; those girls
... region of the Nepal. In this tradition those girl and women on their monthly cycle are is...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch activities. In sum, in some cases such sensational activities can outshine...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in many cases, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2428.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 485.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00618556701 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53822388847 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492783505155 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 778.5 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2047248941 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13127807948 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507337651447 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153757620305 0.0758088955206 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948348351816 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154658403197 0.0667264976115 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.