Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
“A benefit to the majority is a benefit to all”, that is a popular saying in Nigeria which indicates the significant of the majority. This can be related to this prompt which seeks to determine that researchers should focus their research on research with the greatest impact interms of population. I am in support of this recommendation mainly because the purpose of science is to improve lives of individuals, the best way this well achieved is to focus on the problems with the greatest impact. Other reasons would be explored in the course of this response.
Firstly, as stated earlier, the main goal of scientific research , in all fields, is to improve the global living conditions in ways that are applicable to that field of research. The ultimate benefit is to develop a global society where all individuals function to their optimum capcity with minimal losses. Focusing on research gaps with affects the greatest numbe of people is the best way to achieve these. For example, the global warming is a phenomenon that is gradually growing to affect a significant proportion of the earth population. As such numerous research are focused on reducing human activities that causes it, such as emission of harmful pollutants, and so on. Success in this area is a greater achievement to science because it improves global lives of people.
In addition, with a greater research focus it is easier to track changes and monitor research results. Of instance, during clinical trials of developed drugs, compounds with activities on common medical illness such as diabetes yield faster and more accurate result because majority of peoples have these illnesses therefore it is easier to obtain results and make adjustments or recommendations where necessary. In addition, research areas with the greatest population impacts are more likely to get research funding because of their significant effects of the lives of humans. Example is with research funding for cancer therapy.
However, it is important to also consider certain research that would be most beneficial to a subset of poplualtion that also pose potential benefitas to the lives of people. Congentital and gentic illnesses quickly comes to mind. Babies are a smaller subset of global population but research to eradicate genetic illnesses like sickle cell disease, congenital heart disease, type 1 diabetes. This would also improve the lives of these populations. Thus, achieving the overall aim of science.
In conclusion, it is important for science to focus on a research that has impact on greater number of peo-ple because it would serve to imptove the lives of such people and the society; and it would be easier to see reaults and trace errors. However, it may also be important to consider research that would impact a smaller subset of individuals.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...er, the main goal of scientific research , in all fields, is to improve the global...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itas to the lives of people. Congentital and gentic illnesses quickly comes to mi...
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Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...it is important for science to focus on a research that has impact on greater number of p...
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Line 9, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o focus on a research that has impact on greater number of peo-ple because it wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2376.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78277852743 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477124183007 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2237731933 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260166665548 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816401369217 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727765333223 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149390915546 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690403539777 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...er, the main goal of scientific research , in all fields, is to improve the global...
^^
Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itas to the lives of people. Congentital and gentic illnesses quickly comes to mi...
^^
Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...it is important for science to focus on a research that has impact on greater number of p...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o focus on a research that has impact on greater number of peo-ple because it wou...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2376.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78277852743 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477124183007 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2237731933 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260166665548 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816401369217 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727765333223 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149390915546 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690403539777 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.